Ehhhh..

[twisted_innards]

I started yet another short story...
I dunno if I like it yet but I'll let you know.
I'm also thinking about doing two perspectives on the story, to make it...different?
Anywho this is the first chapter, as seen through James' eyes.

Comments

[plastic_pistol_]

i like it...

<3

[twisted_innards]

Eee hee hee.

[ckyslipknot187]

dude thts rele good ( i think ) cant make any guarantes on what anyone else thinkgs but if u keep on writing it post it

[twisted_innards]

Yeah it's good.

[x187xx]

you know i always love your short stories.
you should write a book or something. id buy it in a heartbeat.

youre very talented benjamin!
<3

[twisted_innards]

lol yeah I'll try and get them published for you.

[x187xx]

definitely do.
ill buy them all then keep them in my sacred benjamin shamblin shrine
i mean......
<3

[twisted_innards]

lol niiice

[xnowherechildx]

... i wish it didn't end there... you should keep writting. Quite good so far. If you do write anymore i want to read it. Very nice...

<3

[twisted_innards]

Alrighty. I'll put some effort into it.

[tallmanevan]

gizzy.

[twisted_innards]

That's all you have to say?
Gizzy...
I was going to have her name be Gene, and seeing as that is a guy's name she would have the nickname Gizzy.