I dunno what happened, but hearing of another school shooting inspired this very strange poem. This poem, even its title, is double-meaning. It's... a Valentine. For somebody. If he understands it.
I don't care how bloody it was, that made my eyes tear... thank you. I feel whole again for some reason. You have no idea how this made me feel, just reading it, it makes my heart feel fulfilled.
I have to say congratulations... I think you read the words and felt the hidden double meaning. Literally, this poem was about a gunner rampaging a location. Figuratively, the meaning that you must have felt, this poem was about realizing hidden feelings of affection, and trying to defend them from people who want them dead.
I actually cried a little bit writing the final half of the piece. Though I don't know where this poem came from in my twisted little mind, it was something I felt very strongly. I'm... really happy that it actually provoked an emotion from someone other than me. Especially you, as you were its intended recipient.
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I actually cried a little bit writing the final half of the piece. Though I don't know where this poem came from in my twisted little mind, it was something I felt very strongly. I'm... really happy that it actually provoked an emotion from someone other than me. Especially you, as you were its intended recipient.
Ultimately, I'm glad you liked it.
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