Young and In Love and Forever (DaiMao)

Jun 05, 2011 21:44

Author: Ginnie hibimaosuki
Genre: Romance. But more on fluff.
Rating: PG-13 for brief mentions of boykissing
Word count: over 3700 (CONGRATULATE ME)
Spoilers: None, really.
Disclaimers: I don't own Takumi-kun Series or TeniMyu. If I did, I'd be the luckiest girl in the world.

Notes: Eight and a half months after I first started it, I finally finished it! A ( Read more... )

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thesundaywriter June 5 2011, 14:16:03 UTC
*wibbles*

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hibimaosuki June 5 2011, 14:16:50 UTC
Wow, you're fast :)) You just ZIPPED through this fic, didn't you XD

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thesundaywriter June 5 2011, 14:34:04 UTC
Lol I'm just used to speed reading, but it provided a good break from thinking up my presentation for my interview tomorrow~

but really, *wibbles* It was so sweet, dreamy and melancholic, it made me happy inside. As I was reading it I was imagining the scenes like a music video. I don't normally read much second person fic but somehow this fit =3

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hibimaosuki June 5 2011, 14:47:03 UTC
Glad I could provide a much-needed intermission :D

Haha! Like I told Asuka ages ago, second person just really fit for what I wanted to do with this story. Introspection-from-outside, if that makes sense to you. ^^;

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vannerrie June 5 2011, 14:32:37 UTC
"A few of these events actually did happen in real life"

*curious*

Overall, good job for writing such a wonderful fic, i can now have a good night sleep :-)

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hibimaosuki June 5 2011, 14:49:16 UTC
One of which is Mao missing the release event for the BluRay of DL5th because he indeed got sick. And not updating his blog for a while then coming back with an entry that didn't really say much about what happened (though a few people, myself included, know what *did* happen).

Thank you! I haven't written in FOREVER, and I'm bad with lengthy fics (either I never finish them or I turn them into multi-chapters that never get finished).

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appypie4000 June 5 2011, 14:55:41 UTC
That was...amazing O_O

Love it.
I love the details & I love the flow of your writing style. I like the transitions. Its been a long time since I read a good fic. I didn't know u were an author ^^

With the girlfriend part is that what REALLY happened? Cause I remember you saying in a comment that it was too embarrassing to give all the details.
Oh and i have another question but, I won't ask, cause then people will be curious of ur "connections" :P

Good story! I look forward to more in the future. Thanks

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hibimaosuki June 5 2011, 14:59:08 UTC
I'm glad you love it!! :D

Yes, the girlfriend part is something that really happened. I did not, however, include in my fic the whole story of the relationship.

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appypie4000 June 5 2011, 15:17:14 UTC
"Maybe then you will have a family that wasn't made with him, with a child of your own that smiles up at you and slips her tiny hand away from your grasp, running to her beloved godfather who spoils her to no end and constantly tells her that she is so much like you ( ... )

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hibimaosuki June 5 2011, 15:19:38 UTC
LOL sorry, the line you copy-pasted is now different. I keep changing details XD

That's one of my favorite parts of the story too. And yes, that's exactly how I wanted it to come across. Thanks for seeing it that way ^_____^

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hibimaosuki June 5 2011, 15:52:29 UTC
Thank you! ^_^

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maomaochan June 5 2011, 17:23:46 UTC
So beautiful, absolutely beautiful!!!! You're an amazing writer, I 'awwwwed' at every moment! Definitely my favorite fic ever! XDDDD ( ... )

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hibimaosuki June 6 2011, 00:14:25 UTC
Thanks for reading!

I've always imagined Yun to be devious. Kinda like Fuji. Only worse because he actually exists and Fuji doesn't. =))

Haha. Mao didn't smile because of the scene they just filmed. He just smiled because he felt like it. Because Daisuke was smiling at him and he couldn't help but smile back. ^^; And yup, that did actually happen -- Daisuke was the biggest support for Mao after the Mio incident.

The ending wasn't originally supposed to be there :)) I'm glad I put it. It's one of my favorite parts of the story.

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