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petitebelette in twists_of_fate

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Jun 14, 2009 23:59

sweet dreams - oneshot
Fandom: Heroes
Characters: Sylar/Elle
Rating: K.
Disclaimer: I do not own anything.
Summary: If it’s not love, it’s something close enough. Set sort of after The Butterfly Effect and AU from there.

( So far, he hasn’t said a word to her since he opened those big dark eyes of his, but she can tell that he hates her, and loves her, and wants her just by the looks he shoots her sometimes. Elle can tell these things-she’s really good at reading him, she thinks-and whenever his gaze flits across her writhing body trying to get comfortable on the slab, she curls the corners of her mouth up and winks at him. He likes it, she can tell. )

sylar/elle, !oneshot, heroes, !fanfic, !completed

Comments 13

catyuy June 15 2009, 04:09:14 UTC

Very nice.

petitebelette June 15 2009, 04:22:21 UTC

Thanks. :))))

superkappa June 15 2009, 04:14:23 UTC

You, my friend, have a wonderful way with words. Some of the ways you phrased things were just so...vivid, I loved it. Especially things like:

This idea has always made her hurt, like someone was taking an ice cream scooper to hollow out her heart. In her nightmares she sees it happening, and she’s chained to a black, cold surface, and there’s only her tears and she has no spark to fight back.

She could say it’s because she loves him, because she cares, but Elle doesn’t. Everyone’s always told Elle she’s incapable of feeling these things, and that’s okay-they’re dead wrong, and she almost giggles because they are dead wrong because he’s just killed almost everyone in her life.

These were just great insights to how Elle thinks and probably sees the world.

petitebelette June 15 2009, 04:24:02 UTC

Thank you so much! XD That means a lot--I was worried when I started writing Sylar/Elle fic I wouldn't be able to capture her. <3

superkappa June 15 2009, 05:07:42 UTC

Well, I really like your take on Elle and hope to see much more from you <3

di_elle June 15 2009, 16:34:05 UTC

I must repeat myself but I really like your Elle. And how they understand each other (that is the reason why they were perfect together.)

petitebelette June 15 2009, 23:43:35 UTC

Thank you so much. XD That is exactly why they are perfect for each other. ^^

helplessdancer June 15 2009, 16:36:27 UTC

Y'know, originally, I thought the appeal of Sylar/Elle might just be the hot hate/love sex. I think I believe differently now thanks to this.

Looooooves it!

petitebelette June 15 2009, 23:47:13 UTC

YESSS. XD TY BB.

byrd_of_june June 15 2009, 22:13:27 UTC

This just made my week. ♥

Like superkappa said, you have a way with words. A very lovely way with words.

petitebelette June 15 2009, 23:47:43 UTC

Awwww, thank you so much!! ♥