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Jul 10, 2009 18:17

electricity and homicidal tendencies - prompts
Fandom: Heroes
Characters: Sylar/Elle
Rating: K for the first one, STRONG M for the second.
Table: here
Disclaimer: I do not own anything.
Summary:Two drabbles/ficlets for the prompt table. No particular connection between them.

WARNING: The second one is non-con. Technically.

( A normal wife would tell him she believes in him, that he’s strong and good and he can fight it. Elle smiles and kisses his skin, twirling his hair between her fingers. She sends a little shock from her lips, and nuzzles into his neck when he tenses up and gasps out a little pleasurable sigh. )

sylar/elle, heroes, !fanfic, !completed, !prompts

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lemomina July 10 2009, 23:12:04 UTC

Where Have you been all these months ?!

THESE ARE Unbelievably GOOD !!! I loved them

The Tenderness & Sweetness in the 1st one and the Toughness & Sadness in the 2nd one
Though Sylar's conflict in the 1st one will make it bitter sweet ;D

petitebelette July 11 2009, 02:40:12 UTC

IDK, having a life rofl.

Thank you, dear!! :D

lemomina July 11 2009, 02:43:56 UTC

LOL !
Okay, Now you have to make up for it by writing more & more Syelle Fics ( or fics for pairing that i read )

You are welcome Hun ;D

petitebelette July 11 2009, 03:15:19 UTC

LOL no worries. I'm working on another Syelle fic now. :P

<3

catyuy July 10 2009, 23:12:47 UTC

Love both of these.

petitebelette July 11 2009, 02:40:28 UTC

Thanks. :D

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petitebelette July 11 2009, 02:41:29 UTC

Thanks, bb. :D <3

superkappa July 11 2009, 00:37:38 UTC

I loved the first one. I think even if they settled down, he would always have that desire for power, and I loved how you addressed that issue.

I also really loved the second one for very different reasons. I most especially loved:
She let him take it. Once upon a time, he’d given her his heart. She could part with this.

Like an eye for an eye, or a happily ever after.

petitebelette July 11 2009, 02:42:26 UTC

Thanks, dear. :D

Oddly enough, the second one was indirectly inspired by our RP, haha.

superkappa July 11 2009, 03:04:24 UTC

That's awesome. The fact that I helped indirectly inspire that makes me happy!

petitebelette July 11 2009, 03:18:57 UTC

:D
p.s. If you don't want to go the smut way it's clearly heading right now, that's cool. (Maybe I have reservations about RPing smut just because the person I usually RP with makes me write it all because she swears up and down she's no good at it, rofl, so I sort of consider it a courtesy to ask? ANYWAY lol.) But if you are okay with where it's going, I'm a fan of smut as much as plot. :P

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spiderwebb July 11 2009, 01:50:23 UTC

these are both very good. i don't usually read non-con, but i squinted and this was done well.

thanks for sharing!

petitebelette July 11 2009, 02:43:29 UTC

Thank you! I'm happy you gave it a chance. :P I never thought I'd write non-con.