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petitebelette in twists_of_fate

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Jul 23, 2009 16:25

electricity and homicidal tendencies - prompts
Fandom: Heroes
Characters: Sylar/Elle
Rating: M.
Table: here
Disclaimer: I do not own anything.
Summary: Four drabbles/ficlets for the prompt table. No particular connection between them.

( He hates everything about her-those graceful, sultry curls of her lips and the way her small perfect body moves-he hates it so much he seethes. Her voice hurts, and her smile burns, and it takes Sylar approximately five more seconds of her touch to realize he doesn’t hate anything about her; he hates that she’s not his so completely it paralyzes him. )

sylar/elle, heroes, !fanfic, !prompts

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petitebelette July 25 2009, 00:35:52 UTC

TY BB. NO NO KEEP GUSHING. MY EGO LIKES THE ATTENTION~ :D :P

omgomgrofl I was thinking of Star Trek when I wrote that line.

starry_eyed July 24 2009, 03:34:39 UTC

Oh I loved these. Especially the first two.

And this line?

“I bet that’s what you say to all the girls,” she snaps out sarcastically, and he chuckles low in his throat.

Absolutely perfect.

petitebelette July 25 2009, 00:36:02 UTC

Thank you!! :)

di_elle July 24 2009, 22:12:27 UTC

I love all, and above all the 3rd one. But all great, really.

petitebelette July 25 2009, 00:36:16 UTC

Thank you!! <333

lemomina July 24 2009, 22:40:37 UTC

I LOVED THEM <33
Your writing is so Badass XD
I loved the 1s& last one more but the 1st one is my fave , Sequel ?! *Puppy Eyes *

petitebelette July 25 2009, 00:36:51 UTC

Hahaha, thanks! :D
IDK, maybe, we'll see haha.

do_you_like_pie July 25 2009, 00:33:01 UTC

These are really great!

petitebelette July 25 2009, 00:36:59 UTC

Thank you!! :D