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[petitebelette]

he ate my heart - part one
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Sylar/Elle
Rating: PG-13 now, NC-17 later.
Disclaimer: I do not own anything.
Summary: There comes a time in life, Elle thinks, when everything sucks. And if Elle thinks life can’t get any worse, of course the bitch has to prove her wrong. S3, AU.
Dedication: FOR LIZ/disalae FOR HER BIRTHDAY. WHICH WAS

Comments

[disalae]

Hahahahaha not months. Month ;D

And without further ado...I LOVE YOU AND IF I DON'T SEE THE REST OF THIS I WILL TAKE MY LOVE AWAY. Just kidding but seriously, you know (or you will know in like 2 seconds) that I fangirl you and love your writing and it just makes me squeal that you're writing this for me. I can't wait to see more, I kinda love the interaction you have between all of the different characters and the different twist you have on the 309 scene. Not super different, but just different enough to make it interesting. And your Elle voice is, of course, spot on. I love the way you write her, it's so honest and to the point, the way I think she would be in her head.

Please please please go on ♥

[superkappa]

What a great beginning <3333 I cannot wait to see where you go with this! I am on the edge of my seat! Okay, I'm really lying in my bed but whatever! This was such an exciting beginning.

[jacquelin825]

hahaha! love Elle's voice in this!
Shocking Sylar is something I wanna do in almost every episode now-a-days, lol! GO ELLE XD
GREAT start! cant wait to read the rest!

[skysamuelle]

ooh...this was a tantalizing appetizer. Your elle voice was twistedly hilarious and spot on, introducing us to the scene with all its sarcastic glory.
and sylar coming in and taking the shock of his life, litterally? that was priceless!

MY favorite lines? here: "Elle would have giggled a little and gave said mythical person some electro-shock therapy.

Actually, she is thinking of it, thinking of giving Mohinder and Petrelli all the therapy they’ll ever need."

[di_elle]

Ah! Love Love Love for pissed Elle don't buying Fly!Momo and Arthur BS. And of course, Sylar being there is the last drop.

Fry Everything! ehm..

I really want to know how this will end...