my essay

[txcowboydave]

The United States of America is viewed by the world as the land of opportunity and above all else, the land of freedom. Since the establishment of our nation, superior standards set forth by our founding fathers have created equal opportunity for all citizens. However, some rights have yet to be given to certain minority groups. In America it is

Comments

[obello_ragazzo]

pretty good. i think you could expan a little more with more examples and scenarios so there is an all around feeling to it, but if you were suppose to have it concise and to the point, this would be perfect. it all depends on who you're writing it for; what's your audience? good job man.