Original Fiction: as much a light, as it is a flame

[txilar]

as much a light, as it is a flame
Adult | ~9999
Content Notes: Infidelity
Summary: More and more Itzal feels like a kept pet. He's sick and tired of it. And then Iudicael's mystery guest appears and everything changes.
Notes: Written for ingenius-inc for the dystopia/post-apocalypse round of smut_fest.

Also posted at Ao3: as much a light, as it is a flame

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Comments

[atsuki_hime]

I loved it! I could tell that this could have been waaaayyyyy longer if there weren't time constraints, but it was great as it is now.

I felt a little sorry for Iudicael, but he wasn't treating Itzal right in the first place. And Ren was just dashing! For some reason, he has a Spanish accent in my head, hehe.

[txilar]

thank you!! ^_^

and yes, seriously, i cut out at least 3k words... maybe more. don't worry about cael. itzal was his trophy husband-to-be. i actually had a bit in there about him ending up with clement and it being 'a deserved fate--for both of them' but had to cut it. i thought about writing a short bit for them for smut-fest's 'gift round' which invites us to revisit past fictions.

dashing ren! now i see him stroking a musketeer-esque mustache. hmmm. thank you for reading! i'm cheered! and beaming!

[atsuki_hime]

I think you should write that part with Cael and Clement, especially since we didn't see much of Clement in the story.

And because I started watching the community, I decided to join smut_fest's shifter round, teehee! Will you be joining?

[txilar]

oh that's awesome! yay!

i haven't decided if i will. i want to, of course, i just know i have a busy couple of months so i might skip this round. get a fix writing some small things perhaps and then pick up the next round. i'm so glad you joined up though, yay!