Comments | txorakeriak: fic: Lo importante es marcar (Bastian Schweinsteiger/Mario Gómez, PG-13)

txorakeriak

fic: Lo importante es marcar (Bastian Schweinsteiger/Mario Gómez, PG-13)

Mar 14, 2011 23:37

Title: Lo importante es marcar
Author: txorakeriak
Fandom: Football RPS, German National Team
Pairing: Bastian Schweinsteiger/Mario Gómez
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I'm a lying bastard and made this all up. I don't claim to know any of the players I write about, they're most definitely not mine, and this very probably didn't happen. No payment involved, no ( Read more... )

player: schweinsteiger, .football, player: gómez, fb: wc2010, #fanfiction, team: nationalmannschaft

Comments 19

This must be the longest comment I have ever written... july_v March 14 2011, 23:22:10 UTC

Ignore the randomness. I am writing the comment while I read so I don’t forget anything…

"Does that mean you owe your life to FIFA's regulations now?" Mario says with a grin. "Wow. Not everyone can say that of themselves. You must feel special."
AHAHAHA! This is… I am just laughing… XD

I totally side with Basti, by the way. (I assume you do too) that Madrid will forever be better than Barfa! (God, this just made me like Mario a tiny bit less… Same happened with Daniel Brühl. I should have never had to find out that he’s Catalan and a Culé… ugh…It broke my heart a little.)

I outrank you, so you shouldn't argue with meAwesome. Guess who’d be topping if they were having sex ( ... )

Re: This must be the longest comment I have ever written... txorakeriak March 16 2011, 22:44:13 UTC

OMG, look at this monster comment!!! I love it!!! :D

Dude, I'm so so so glad that you liked this fic! I was a bit nervous because I'm a bit uncomfortable writing about German players (for some weird reason!), but I suppose I can stop worrying now? :D

Of course everyone is entitled to their own opinion but I must admit I was a bit disappointed when I read somewhere that Mario is a Barcelona fan. For this fic, however, it came in quite handy because I know that Bastian prefers Real Madrid. XD

LOL, I can't really explain the fascination with foreign swear words, but I definitely share it! XD Mind you, in my first lesson of French at school, our teacher said "To get this out of the way, I'm going to teach you a couple of swear words before everything else." No kidding! XDD That was hilarious. Though it doesn't always happen that I know swear words first. For instance, I still don't know any Basque swear words. ;)

BUT! I didn't know you spoke Lithuanian! How awesome is that?? Many kudos to you for this!! :D

Can you imagine him ( ... )

Re: This must be the longest comment I have ever written... july_v March 16 2011, 23:36:34 UTC

Stop worrying immediately! I am muchly in love with the way you wrote these two. I have no Mario to compare yours with but your Basti must be my fave. (And I have read a lot of Schweinski, as I got into the fandom that way ( ... )

Re: This must be the longest comment I have ever written... txorakeriak March 17 2011, 19:52:47 UTC

Okay, okay, I will stop worrying immediately! XD How can I keep worrying when you say such nice things about my Bastian? I never really know how to write him, so this really means a lot to me! :D

If I remember correctly, yes, he did. And I did like him a bit less when he said it, too. XD You can't help headdesking about footballers' tastes sometimes. ;) But yeah, Schweini has good taste, LOL! (If I'm not entirely mistaken he owns or used to own a dog called Guti or something. XD)

Food is very important indeed! Most of the Basque words I know are foodstuffs, LOL. You can't help memorising them when you come across them every day! (And when there are adorable videos of Real Sociedad players about food. *cough* XD ( ... )

Thread 5

zanoranna March 15 2011, 02:09:42 UTC

GENIUS. I love Mario/Bastian and this was all kinds of perfect. Bastian's teasing and Mario's unrealized infatuation and that moment after the semi-final, and not listening to the manager and and and! Speechless!!

txorakeriak March 16 2011, 22:44:24 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked this so much! I have a weakness for unrealised infatuations but I can't remember ever writing about it, so it was a special challenge for me! :D

sophie_lfc March 15 2011, 09:38:23 UTC

Very good!

txorakeriak March 16 2011, 22:44:32 UTC

Thank you! :)

mer5 March 15 2011, 14:54:39 UTC

xDD I don't know much about the German NT. I know who they are of course but rarely read anything with them but decided to try because it's you. And it was really funny. I love the learning words parts and how focused Bastian was in learning swear words xDDD.And the banter between them was hilarious xD.
I was a bit heartbroken with the defeat, here. To be honest in RL I was too busy trying to believe we really were there to think in Germany but I think next Euro will be yours. Our team is crap right now (and how much that hurts! :( ) and the end was really sweet and adorable. Great job Bill.

And because if I didn't correct you I wouldn't be me:

- La concha de tu madre y pendejo are expressions from American Spanish. The first one is Argentinian and the second one is Mexican. I know what they mean but they aren't used in Spain unless you are latinAmerican.

-tenemos que quedarnos en este puto edificio para toda la noche. El para sobra. Remember para means for or to depending on the context it isn't needed here.

txorakeriak March 16 2011, 22:44:43 UTC

I'm very honoured you decided to read this! :D And glad you enjoyed it! I love fic about players learning foreign languages, so it was a lot of fun to write this! XD

You know I was rooting for Spain during the World Cup, but I must admit that seeing the German players so utterly devastated after the semifinal made me sad. :( (Don't say you're crap at the moment! Friendlies don't mean anything, and when the next proper match comes, Spain will win again!)

And thank you for your corrections! I suppose I shouldn't trust Iker Casillas when it comes to insults, huh? XDDD And I know that "pendejo" is a South American insult but my dictionary said that in Spain it means "pubic hair", which I think is hilarious. But I prefer your suggestions and have edited the fic accordingly. ¡Muchas gracias! :)

mer5 March 16 2011, 22:56:12 UTC

¿pendejo as pubic hair? It's the first time I heard that. Perhaps in some areas but not the ones I've been xD

txorakeriak March 17 2011, 19:53:04 UTC

I'm not making this up! *halo* :D But good to know that even a renowned dictionary like PONS can be crap sometimes. XD

july_v March 21 2011, 18:27:33 UTC

( ... )

txorakeriak March 21 2011, 21:35:52 UTC

*DIES* Okay, those two really are WAAAAAAAY to obvious. O__O Now I can't wait to write porn about them... ;)

july_v March 21 2011, 21:51:18 UTC

I saw this and thought of you! (See, crush is getting worse!!!)
So yes, porn, good good! :D

txorakeriak March 21 2011, 23:20:08 UTC

Hahaha, I'm glad to hear it! XDD Is there a video to this? Cos I really wouldn't mind seeing them doing slashy stuff for a bit longer... ;)