fic: Bacalao al pil pil (Xabi Alonso/Esteban Granero, G)

[txorakeriak]

Title: Bacalao al pil pil
Author: txorakeriak
Fandom: Football RPS, Real Madrid
Pairing: Xabi Alonso/Esteban Granero
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I'm a lying bastard and made this all up. I don't claim to know any of the players I write about, they're most definitely not mine, and this very probably didn't happen. No payment involved, no offence intended. This is

Comments

[sheep_emilia]

AWWWWWWW! So charming, just like them! I loved how sweet it was, in the very best of ways :)
I concur - more of this, please ;)

[txorakeriak]

YAY! Thank you! :D I'm so glad you liked this! And glad it wasn't too sugary sweet - I was afraid I had overdone the fluff a bit. XD Thank you!

[mer5]

Awwwwwwww. Thank you!! It's cute and I find amusing how Xabi teases him. It seems than, more like a first time like they are already together and just pretending/teasing each other. They seem really comfortable at least to me, even if Esteban is a bit nervous.
I usually can't picture him trying to pout, but as here just mocking it fits.

Thanks Bill, it made me smile and I'm sure I'll need this kind of pick up in a couple of hours *hugs*

[txorakeriak]

So happy you liked this! I actually intended to write a drabble but then I got more and more ideas and so I decided to turn this into a longer piece. XD As for the teasing and all, I figured they're perfectly familiar with each other after having been teammates for a while now and I didn't want them to act too awkward around each other, and somehow my Xabi!muse insisted on being cheeky to Esteban. XD He is evil. XD

I'm glad the fic made you smile! And thanks again for the translation! :)

[darkensunrise]

This is so cute, I love the idea of Xabi and Esteban. Not enough Granero fic, tbh! Loved it!

[txorakeriak]

Thank you, glad you liked the fic! I agree, Granero is way too underrepresented in this fandom! He should be written more often!

[distira]

d'aaawwwwww! oh this is adorable and perfect and exactly what i needed to read after that debacle of a match this afternoon

[txorakeriak]

YAY, I'm so glad to have been of service! :D Thanks for the nice comment! And sorry about that match!

[july_v]

Late comment. But you already know I loved it!
It's so adorable in a non-cheesy way. The pairing, the funny twist when Xabi picks on Pirata. THE PAIRING ITSELF!
But, one thing to complain about and I'm sure you know what's coming....

WHY DID YOU STOP THERE? WHERE IS THE REST???

[txorakeriak]

Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it, and that you didn't find it too cheesy! :D And I just love the thought of mischievous!Xabi, I can't help it. XD

I'm sorry I didn't continue there, but I'm sure you can imagine what happened once they reached Xabi's flat. ;)