Comments | txorakeriak: fic: Media naranja (Miguel Torres/Rubén de la Red, PG-13)

txorakeriak

fic: Media naranja (Miguel Torres/Rubén de la Red, PG-13)

Jan 28, 2012 02:11

Title: Media naranja
Author: txorakeriak
Fandom: Football RPS
Pairing: Miguel Torres/Rubén de la Red
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I'm a lying bastard and made this all up. I don't claim to know any of the players I write about, they're most definitely not mine, and this very probably didn't happen. No payment involved, no offence intended. This is for my own ( Read more... )

.football, team: real madrid, player: torres m., #fanfiction, player: de la red

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txorakeriak January 28 2012, 15:05:05 UTC

Thank you! :) A smile is a great compliment! I'm so glad you liked this fic! :)

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txorakeriak January 31 2012, 20:35:41 UTC

I'm glad to hear it! :)

Don't worry, that fic isn't going anywhere. Take all the time you need. I'm very excited that you want to read it! :)

sumrndmgrl January 28 2012, 16:54:49 UTC

I don't see much De La Red fics around so this is a treat :)

"He wondered what would happen if he'd ever lose his self-control and do something stupid."
I like how you explained his thoughts afterward.

The ending jsdklajekwlanms CUTE. Good job!

txorakeriak January 31 2012, 20:35:49 UTC

Oh, glad to have been of service! :D And thanks for the kind comment! :D

winter_solstice January 29 2012, 12:20:49 UTC

lovely, but unbelievably sad too.

txorakeriak January 31 2012, 20:36:00 UTC

Thank you! It really makes me angry sometimes that the footballing world is still so incredibly backwards and forcing people to be unhappy and/or to live lies.

sophie_lfc January 29 2012, 15:03:27 UTC

Aww, this fic is so awesome :) <3

txorakeriak January 31 2012, 20:36:10 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

july_v February 3 2012, 17:26:29 UTC

YOU WROTE MY FAVOURITE SEXY SPANIARD FOR MY BIRTHDAY! AND 2/3 OF MY OT3!!! AND YOU WROTE SOMETHING!!!! FOR ME!!!! ON MY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!

:D
I was very very happy when I saw you posted it. And then I was floored because it was so LONG! :D I appreciate it all the more because you#re so busy and then you take the time to write for me!!! *-*

Now on to the actual comment:
This is a mix of 'ouch my poor heart, those two sweet boys' and 'damn no Rubén don't go!' and 'fucking finally you two get each other!' and 'dawwwwwwwwwwwwww'.

My very favourite line must be this one here:
"We might risk even more if we keep pretending we don't want this." becaus it's so true. I'm happy Rubén listened.

THANK YOU!!! *smooch*

txorakeriak February 7 2012, 23:08:19 UTC

BUT OF COURSE I WROTE THAT! YOU REQUESTED ALL THAT!!!! :D

Well, I was feeling like an idiot to have forgotten your birthday so I wanted to write you something particularly good and I hope it worked out more or less. ;) Your reactions were definitely what I was aiming for! :D

I'm very happy Rubén listened, too - believe me, angst is NOT easy for me to write, I always suffer so much with those guys!! ;)

YOU'RE MOST WELCOME, PRINCESS!! *royalsmooch* :D