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[tyndall_blue]

This is my final story from fiction writing last year. Our first major turn in. Not my best work but I'm still fond of it.

A Ri and Gaby Story

Title: As If You Were Absent
Rating: M
Summary:

Comments

[solarfae]

make ri so sad ;_; and so pathetically in love with gaby. it's a shame he's so proud and gaby's so bad at interpreting just who ri's mad at. -_-

[steinsgrrl]

This is what I thought it was, the first person I beta'd before. While I thought it was wonderful then, you have done amazing things to it. I was completely spellbound reading it again. The ending isn't nearly as obvious as the previous incarnation, and I'm not sure how I feel about that, considering our earlier discussion. That said, I do love this, and I love these characters more and more. I'd love so much to see more of them.