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Feb 02, 2009 13:58

Title: La Belle et la Bete (or, Snarky and the Cynic)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Matsumiya
Word Count: 3936 (4209 with Omake)
Notes: A sexy epilogue for maiaide, who asked for it and deserves it for all the wonderful feedback she leaves me, and a crack omake for me, who felt like adding it XD Not as fairy-tale style as the rest of the story has been, but then ( Read more... )

p: matsumoto jun/ninomiya kazunari, rating: nc-17, c: ninomiya kazunari, *fairy tale, series: beauty and the beast, #chapter, *au, ~arashi, c: matsumoto jun

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inuhariko February 2 2009, 20:47:15 UTC
I really did love this series all the way through, but the Omake outright killed.

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vintage_belle February 3 2009, 03:11:02 UTC
Killed in a good way, I hope XD;

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inuhariko February 3 2009, 04:57:37 UTC
Yes, yes! Killed in a very good way!

I apologize for the ambiguity. >_

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tiusan February 2 2009, 21:51:10 UTC
I read the whole series and now finished with this and all I can say is that it was great.wonderful.magnificent.MORE. All coherency is over appreciated and downright impossible now after the omake. Which is pure WIN. ♥

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vintage_belle February 3 2009, 03:12:10 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for taking the time to read it ♥

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tinahyena February 3 2009, 00:11:31 UTC
YAY!!! AN EPILOGUE!!! i saw this and was like "what???? i thought it was over??"

*runs off to read it*

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tinahyena February 3 2009, 00:29:00 UTC
ohh the omake was so funny. i loved it.

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vintage_belle February 3 2009, 03:13:58 UTC
Well, it was supposed to be over, but I'd been turning over the idea of an epilogue and when maiaide asked for one I had the excuse for it ^^;;
Glad you liked it!

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nicefinalbeam February 3 2009, 01:21:48 UTC
Awwww. This is really interesting, since the language you have to work with is a bit more fairytale like, but it turned out wonderfully. :)

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vintage_belle February 3 2009, 03:16:06 UTC
I'm glad it turned out all right at all XD The hardest part of this series was seriously writing fairytale porn - I'm not good with flowery language and extended euphemisms.

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nicefinalbeam February 3 2009, 03:29:44 UTC
Can you imagine trying to write it all with fairytale innuendo?

"Jun could tell that Nino's lower regions had gone somewhat... Pinocchio and was pleased with himself for being the cause..."

or

"Nino couldn't help but think, if he were at home and Jun was the Big Bad Wolf, he'd not so much mind a little huffing and puffing..."

I mean really.... I think you're safe. ;)

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vintage_belle February 3 2009, 04:07:22 UTC
Oh gooooooooood XDDDDDDDDDDDDD
I'd sooner die than write any of that. Even writing it in flowery language I wouldn't be able to do. Slightly higher handed speech will have to do. XD

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gimmick_game February 3 2009, 04:07:23 UTC
YOU KNOCKED NINO UP ILU SO HARDCORE.

*a million thumbs up*

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vintage_belle February 3 2009, 05:15:18 UTC
What can I say? The Fairy decreed it must be so XD

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