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[vintage_belle]

Title: Just Us
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Ariake Taisuke/Ariake Koichi
Word Count: 3005
Notes: I wrote this for the JE rarepair anonymeme that popped up a while back and expect nobody to read it. Still. The prompt went like this:
Who: Araike Koichi/Taisuke (RnK - in character, not Nino/Ryo

Comments

[panthera_mort]

Sinfully delicious ;D
...
Erk. That might have just been the wrong thing to say (-.-ll)
But you know it's good!

[vintage_belle]

Well, I guess it's good as incest goes. Maybe. XD;
That's really up to readers.
Thanks for reading!

[maiaide]

...to see Hagimoto (Mura. Whatever.).
WIN.

Instead Koichi pants into his skin, holding on like Taisuke is the last remaining truth in his life. As far as Taisuke knows, he is.
This was my favourite line; it really rang with me.

Well, I think this is the first--no I lie, I've read a few HP twincest fics. It's not really my forte but I thought it could be interesting. I really could feel the mood of Ryuusei here, you captured it really well! I think it had a lot to do with the bracketed side comments. I really felt Koichi's total awkwardness about everything--Shii's marriage, being back in real life--and Taisuke's neediness.

Bravo! ♥

[vintage_belle]

I had to keep the Hagimoto thing. It was too good.

Incest is something I've never written and never thought to write. Even watching the actual show didn't make me want to write it; it was the prompt that got me going.

I'm glad the feeling of RyuuKizu is there. *relief* I was worried about that, which is why I have so many bracketed comments. I couldn't really figure any other way by which to get the same comedic feel. >.>;

Thank you! ♥

[a_mbry0]

omg i really loved this! *WWW*
your writing style, love it too!! you're really good!

[vintage_belle]

Thank you! <3

[vintage_belle]

I was so amused by that, and totally not surprised. XD Oh Nino, you're so tiny.

Thanks for reading!

[gimmick_game]

Absolutely beautiful. ♥ In a pornish way, of course. ;) I always love your porn, because even when it is just hot, dirty sex, it's still beautiful hot, dirty sex. ^__~

Incest is always a touchy subject, but I guess for me as long as the genetic problems that could be faced with a male/female pair (the reason why I really didn't like Boku wa Imouto) just aren't there with a same-sex pair.

I've read it before, with Golf & Mike and some Twincest in HP, but for some reason, this just works between them. I didn't see it either while watching the show, but in the context of after Koichi returns and Shii marries...it fits. All they've ever had was each other. And considering the betrayl they faced, it would be fitting to never trust another again.

♥

(I swear this is the longest fic comment I've ever left. Oi.)

[vintage_belle]

Incest has never been my thing. I just don't particularly care for or against it. I just saw the prompt and started writing it >.>; I doubt I'd have been able to do it set during the course of the show - it just wasn't there.

And, well. Writing basically introspective porn helped, I didn't have to think too much about it.

♥