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Jul 07, 2009 22:10

Title: Chapter Ten [of fourteen?]
Disclaimer: (n) A statement disclaiming something, especially responsibility
Pairing: None. Implied Yamashia Tomohisa/Ninomiya Kazunari if you really want to take it that way.
Rating: PG
Word Count: 6484
Notes: Uh... hi? It's alive?

“You know... I’ll still be damned,” Ueda mused idly, kicking his foot a little, “Made it all the way to the palace of the Borderlands. How they managed to keep that loud-mouthed idiot hidden... I do have to hand it to them, those guards did their job.” )

c: ninomiya kazunari, c: sakurai sho, *angst, #chapter, rating: pg, *au, ~arashi, series: rbty

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sundaecone July 8 2009, 03:08:11 UTC
YOU ARE BAAAAAAAAAAAACK! Oh Elle, I missed your Nino so much. ;___; I also miss your imp!Nino. Uguuuu

Ahahaha Nino prompted the Yamapi nickname. Very nice.
And then Sho found him in the clinic ldkaf;s;sdf I THINK I CAN SMELL FUTURE CONFLICT FROM HEEEEERE~

I find it nice of Yamapi to let Nino be, not pressing so much on his past and what really happened between Nino and Ohno despite his curiosity. ♥

Thanks for updating! *hugs*

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vintage_belle July 8 2009, 03:41:20 UTC
I don't like leaving things unfinished. If I do nothing else in this fandom, I will finish this monster of a thing.

The nickname totally had to come from somewhere. XD

I don't know that I'd call it conflict per se, but it's definitely going to change the way things work. >3

That seems like a very Yamapi thing to do, really. Or at least I think so. And Yamapi knows better than to push - the last thing he wants is for Nino to withdraw before he can help.

Thank you for reading!

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p0kuru July 8 2009, 06:43:16 UTC
oh yaay! you updated this fic! i've been waiting for ages and im glad its long!!
otsukare!!

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vintage_belle July 8 2009, 11:32:25 UTC
Thank you. ♥

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tangiblewhimsy July 8 2009, 10:10:06 UTC
“There are things that he’s never felt before, because the feelings just never reached him. I’ve seen it happen: When he feels for the first time, he gets frustrated and off-balanced. Because he feels so off-balanced, he holds it in until he can’t anymore, then he lashes out. It’s scary, because it all comes out at once. He says things that he doesn’t mean and doesn’t want to say, and hates himself for it after.”

I do believe you just inadvertently implied Ohno is autistic. Which is interesting.

It's 3:08 am and I'm fading fast. So, quickly: It's good to see this updated! The premise of this story caught my attention a few months ago. I like the atmosphere and universe you've created here with the customs and behaviors. It's very immersible. ♥

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vintage_belle July 8 2009, 11:32:01 UTC
*blink* Oh dear. I... certainly didn't mean to. At all. I know next to nothing about autism, and I try to stay away from tossing in random illnesses/conditions that I know nothing about just for the sake of drama.

Thank you for reading. I'm glad you find it enjoyable. :)

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tangiblewhimsy July 8 2009, 19:31:42 UTC
I don't see a problem with it myself, I know it was unintentional. It was just an interesting spin on Ohno's behavior that I've never seen examined in that light before.

I have this habit of making srs associations with things because....well, because I have the knowledge of things to make the associations with. It doesn't mean it really has anything to do with you XD

And thank you for writing, I enjoy your pieces frequently. Keep up the good work!

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oviparous July 13 2009, 07:31:08 UTC
may i butt in?! i am so sorry, but i used to be a spec ed teacher and your statement just made me laugh and clap and go, "yes, yes..." XD

but in real life i doubt he is in on the spectrum. in this fic, though... rather probable.

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doriana186 July 8 2009, 12:37:11 UTC
Yay, update! I love this AU! ^^

My favorite bits were Yama-pink's new nickname and Ohno's "Nakai! Nakai!", and of course Nino's woobiness ♥.

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vintage_belle July 8 2009, 23:12:35 UTC
Thank you!♥

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panthera_mort July 8 2009, 20:47:23 UTC
I'm so glad a new chapter came out.
I've been re-reading this series, it's gotten into my head.
I love that bit about Yamapi's name :DD
Thank you for this! Truly.

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vintage_belle July 8 2009, 23:13:08 UTC
Thank you for taking the time to read it!♥

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