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[vintage_belle]

Title: Chapter Eleven [of twelve?]
Disclaimer: (n) A statement disclaiming something, especially responsibility
Pairing: implied Yamapi/Nino if you really, desperately want to take it that way
Rating: G
Word Count: 6985
Notes: And with this, we're in the home stretch. No, I'm so serious. Right Back to You is coming to an end, likely in the next

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[gimmick_game]

First: (Yamapi was there, but he was also peeking into the box of snacks like he’d never seen food before.) *gigglesnort* Gotta feed the moobs somehow.

Also, I was curious as to when you'd work that in this time, but I definitely liked it this way. The subtle shift from Nino to the four-year old Kazu, slowly recognizing bits of his old life while still remembering current before being enveloped completely. A++++

I definitely can't say I'll be sad to see this end next chapter, but I'm also happy for you for completing it after everything that you've done for it. :) (I still remember how I just ate it all up when you first sent me the document and I went OMFG WHY HAVEN'T YOU POSTED THIS YET?!)

♥

[vintage_belle]

Nobody feeds Yamapi. He's just so unloved and neglected.

So you won't be sad when this ends? Will you throw a party for it? I demand Lady Grey and petti-fours.

Stupid 'fic took on a mind of its own and just wouldn't let go and SEE WHERE IT WENT?! Into never-ending Victorain melodrama. T^T I will never live it down.

Thank you for everything though. :)

[barefootprint]

OMG. you're back! yes! i was waiting so bad for an update of this fic cause i love it so much! but to hell with the long wait. the awesomeness of this chapter more than made up for it. XD

i was a bit confused on the transition from nino to kazu but i caught on to it quickly.

poor ohno. he had to fix what he had done to nino. and good thing nino kinda accepted the fact that he was sho's brother. lol at the yamapi/nino interactions. it was cute. :))

awesome chapter as always! the next one is the last? aww..

anyway thanks for writing this! =3

(sorry if this is the first time i've commented in your fic. i'm new to lj. oh i forgot to mention that i so love all your fics! =3)

[vintage_belle]

The transition was supposed to be confusing, so I'm glad it was. XD Nino and Ohno definitely have a lot to work out, and then Ohno and Sho will have to duke it out over Nino. Won't that be fun? X3

Thank you.♥

[lianne29]

i love this chapter.

Nino now remembers. The scene where he reverted back into his 4 year old self then Sho realized that he had to tell Nino to go back to the present got me teary-eyed.

I really liked your Sho. He is really wanted his brother back but he does not press his wishes.

The threat is still there so I'm still worried for Nino and Aiba. Like Toma, I would like to know how Ueda knows things.

I'm sad it's going to end on the next chapter but i'm also looking forward to the end. ^_^

[vintage_belle]

Aw, I didn't mean for people to cry. orz

I can't imagine Sho being selfish. Even as a prince. XD; So of course he wants Nino to choose what Nino wants.

Uedaaaaa... >3 He's everywhere.

Thank you. :)

[aibakawaii]

I just LOVE this so much...and it's coming to an end so soon? *can't believe it*

Anyways, poor Ohno...But yaay, brothers unite!! xD

Oh, what a wonderful series. ;-; ♥ *practically squealed when I saw the update*

[vintage_belle]

It is indeed going to end. And about time, too. It's been, gosh. Two years that I've been working on this. orz

Thank you. :)

[maiaide]

You didn't stick in 15 more words to make it an even 7000. ;__; LOL

[vintage_belle]

LOL - No, I didn't. My brain was far too fried to come up with 15 extra words.