Actually I feel quite lucky that I could read this in one go.
It flowed so much better that way! While betaing I tried not to flail. I don't know why but OMG...the ending! Gawd the ending! Maybe I flailed just a little before
BUT REALLY IT'S THE BEST POSSIBLE ONE THAT I CAN COME UP WITH IN MY HEAD!
Ahahaha! You have such great knack for details no wonder a fluffly NaNoWriMp turned into this!
Awesome verse! And one you should seriously come back to sometime if you want I guess XD
But you tortured Toma so much! (well Nino more throughout but still!) and no matter what my icon says it is so not okay! XD
And I think its from CHapter 11 but I must have never told you how much I loved the period of Ohno's desperation. I love suffering people (emotionally suffering people) and Ohno's change in demeanor was delicious!
I could have, if I wanted this chapter to never end, come up with an ending that would follow everyone through What Happens Next, I'm sure. I just didn't want to. I like it open.
It's an unfortunate knack at times - I really wanted this to be done a long time ago, when people still cared about it. XD I kind of want to lay the verse to rest, but I suppose if enough people want to know what happens to Toma or Aiba and Jun or Sho, or whatever, I might consider something about them. I just don't want to risk another twenty-year 'fic.
Thank you again for betaing! I'm glad you liked it enough to offer. XD
I wouldn't have known you posted if you hadn't sent me that mail XD
You promoted quite lateXD
Open is good. I'm not really a hardcore Ohmiya shipper. Their domesticness makes me squee a lot but in fics I like when they're friends as long as their not with any other Arashi member. Like Juntoshi + Ohmiya friendship just annoyes me XD
That was an example. Yamapai +Ohmiya friendship would annoy me too XD
Basically what I wanted to say is that I'd like to see their friendship even after Ohno's marriage if you'd ever feel like exploring that aspect.
People still care about it. It's a complicated fic. I'm sure there are many who are having to reread it.
It was a great fic you should be proud :)
In fact one of my other most favourite Ohmiya is from you. Nino as harem boy. Ohno as prince. (I remember the summary but not the title XD)
My my my.. It's been so long but it's so great because this is long.. OMG i though you would never continue this, well it gonna be bad since there not much more right.. hopefully next chapter will come out soon..
I apologize for not commenting in the earlier chps, when I found this fic about a year ago. Somehow, I didn't know what to say/ comment because this fic is so very wonderful and I didn't have the ability to properly express my appreciation for it. I still don't now, but I'm trying my best. Lol.
I like the flow of the story, and how you didn't make Nino recover at a miraculous pace. It gives it a realistic touch. & how despite the special feelings between Ohno and Nino, it didn't transpire into something cliche and the progression between them kinda fits the era? Idk how to say it. ;_; Plus, your characters are rounded and the humanness is addictive. Also, open ending <3
Don't worry about that. I won't say that I don't complain (loudly) to my roommate about comments or lack thereof. But that's because I'm a whiner. XD I know that not everybody wants to comment.
Originally this 'fic was going nowhere near what it became. XD I'm glad it worked out.
Thank you for reading through the whole thing, even with the wait. I'm really happy you enjoyed the story.
Whoa! This whole story was so intense! I spent my whole day off reading this amazing story! The plot and the characters and all that has happened..! And the ending! Oh, I'm so speechless in front of such a wonderful story! The universe you created felt so real and the flow of the story was so good and flawless! This story is definitely in my top three best fanfictions EVER!!! <3
I wouldn't say it's flawless, but I'm happy with what turned out. :)
I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much! Thank you for reading all the way to the end. I'm sure mostly everybody's forgotten about it or given up on it. XD;
This really is one of the first fics I found in fandom and it has a special place near to my heart.
The ending is really...what's necessary for them each to move on. But I'm still left wondering what's going to come between Ohno and Nino. How Toma will fit into this world. How Nino will accustom himself to prince-hood.
You crafted such an enthralling world, let alone the story!
I'm glad you're left wondering, acutally. I wanted it to be that way. By the end of it all I felt that writing out exactly what happened to everyone, where they went, what they did, how their lives turned out, was almost a disservice. The story didn't obey me from the start and it didn't end where I had intended for it to. That's my cue to let the readers decide what happens from the end here.
Or wait until something bothers me enough to have to write about it.
Thank you for reading through to the end. I'm really happy you did!
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It flowed so much better that way! While betaing I tried not to flail. I don't know why but OMG...the ending! Gawd the ending! Maybe I flailed just a little before
BUT REALLY IT'S THE BEST POSSIBLE ONE THAT I CAN COME UP WITH IN MY HEAD!
Ahahaha! You have such great knack for details no wonder a fluffly NaNoWriMp turned into this!
Awesome verse! And one you should seriously come back to sometime if you want I guess XD
But you tortured Toma so much! (well Nino more throughout but still!) and no matter what my icon says it is so not okay! XD
And I think its from CHapter 11 but I must have never told you how much I loved the period of Ohno's desperation. I love suffering people (emotionally suffering people) and Ohno's change in demeanor was delicious!
Gahahahaha! XD
Enjoyed it a lot ^__^
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I could have, if I wanted this chapter to never end, come up with an ending that would follow everyone through What Happens Next, I'm sure. I just didn't want to. I like it open.
It's an unfortunate knack at times - I really wanted this to be done a long time ago, when people still cared about it. XD I kind of want to lay the verse to rest, but I suppose if enough people want to know what happens to Toma or Aiba and Jun or Sho, or whatever, I might consider something about them. I just don't want to risk another twenty-year 'fic.
Thank you again for betaing! I'm glad you liked it enough to offer. XD
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You promoted quite lateXD
Open is good. I'm not really a hardcore Ohmiya shipper. Their domesticness makes me squee a lot but in fics I like when they're friends as long as their not with any other Arashi member. Like Juntoshi + Ohmiya friendship just annoyes me XD
That was an example. Yamapai +Ohmiya friendship would annoy me too XD
Basically what I wanted to say is that I'd like to see their friendship even after Ohno's marriage if you'd ever feel like exploring that aspect.
People still care about it. It's a complicated fic. I'm sure there are many who are having to reread it.
It was a great fic you should be proud :)
In fact one of my other most favourite Ohmiya is from you. Nino as harem boy. Ohno as prince. (I remember the summary but not the title XD)
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Glad Nino is getting better anyway
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There is none more planned at the moment. Unless something really comes back to nibble on my brain there probably won't be any more.
Thank you for reading.
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I apologize for not commenting in the earlier chps, when I found this fic about a year ago. Somehow, I didn't know what to say/ comment because this fic is so very wonderful and I didn't have the ability to properly express my appreciation for it. I still don't now, but I'm trying my best. Lol.
I like the flow of the story, and how you didn't make Nino recover at a miraculous pace. It gives it a realistic touch. & how despite the special feelings between Ohno and Nino, it didn't transpire into something cliche and the progression between them kinda fits the era? Idk how to say it. ;_; Plus, your characters are rounded and the humanness is addictive. Also, open ending <3
Thank you for sharing ♥
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Originally this 'fic was going nowhere near what it became. XD I'm glad it worked out.
Thank you for reading through the whole thing, even with the wait. I'm really happy you enjoyed the story.
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Thank you for writing and sharing! <3
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I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much! Thank you for reading all the way to the end. I'm sure mostly everybody's forgotten about it or given up on it. XD;
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The ending is really...what's necessary for them each to move on. But I'm still left wondering what's going to come between Ohno and Nino. How Toma will fit into this world. How Nino will accustom himself to prince-hood.
You crafted such an enthralling world, let alone the story!
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Or wait until something bothers me enough to have to write about it.
Thank you for reading through to the end. I'm really happy you did!
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