[The Mentalist] - "Visions of Vermilion" {Patrick Jane}

[typings]

Title: Visions of Vermilion
Author: kenzimone
Disclaimer: Don't own.
Fandom: The Mentalist
Characters: Patrick Jane
Rating: R
Word count: 1,500
Summary: Death will linger, given enough incentive.
Note: Spoilers for Pilot and Seeing Red. Utterly unbeta'd.
Crossposted: typings, mentalistfic, fanfiction.net.

AO3 | ff.net

Comments

[ignescent]

omg, this is awesome. I tend to enjoy the concept of Jane seeing far more than he admits too, but never took it to its logical conclusion. This is wonderful.

[kenzimone]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

[puckkit]

I absolutely adore this. Just perfectly written with enough detail but not too much. You can feel his pain so well but you're not drowning in it as you read. Just beautiful!

[kenzimone]

Thank you so much!

[afteriwake]

Oh, wow. This was really very good. I quite enjoyed the picture you painted with each section.

[kenzimone]

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

[jumpfall]

This was a lovely character study of Jane! I think my favourite scene was the one with the Chief of Police (and the understated way in which Jane easily spots the man's ghosts in the cold case), but the last line is particularly poignant.

[kenzimone]

Thank you so much! The Chief of Police thing was a last minute add, but I figured that the station must be filled with old ghosts, right? I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[settiai]

Oh, this was gorgeous.

[kenzimone]

Thank you so much!