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distira October 11 2010, 05:27:54 UTC
ricky. oh ricky. i'm not really a kaka fan but your ricky, i just want to hug him. (and i'm glad iker went to sit with him)

fifa 11. this was the perfect bit of college-boy domesticity for the fic, imo. it fit in perfectly and showed a different side of cesc and nando was hilarious in cameo, too. i loved it. i wanted to be there.

cesc and iker and the wordless aspect of their relationship stun me. i can't really articulate it, which seems appropriate because they don't seem to need to, not yet at least, but it's really, really lovely.

(i used this as a bribe for myself, to finish my french paper. it worked! my gpa thanks you profusely)

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tyrannicides October 11 2010, 15:14:48 UTC
i'm not really a kaka fan

I wasn't either, but he's really grown on me. He's one of those people where it's like, prolonged exposure inevitably results in liking him. I used to not really give a fuck and now I'm like WHEN WILL YOU BE FIT AGAIN? You know I'm missin you.


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distira October 12 2010, 02:28:19 UTC
eeeehhhhhh i feel like i should like him but i can't bring myself to. idk, maybe because he's been injured for basically the whole time he's been at madrid but he just hasn't grown on me. if he's anything irl like he is in your fic, though, i'll give him a chance XD

gotta get it done somehow, right?

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tyrannicides October 12 2010, 05:54:59 UTC
Dude, him and Cristiano.

Meant to be, okay, I don't even like Cristiano, like, at all, but the way he looks at him. They're so fucking dear.

At 2:18, Crispy's like OH YOU.

I mean, this is classic:

What are you guys even doing with that chickie hand shit.

And this.

I love how Kaka's like 8) wat did I do. I laugh because you laugh tho. 8)

Ahaha, sorry, /spam, but I'm a convert on these two, so I sell them with the ferocity of a born-again Christian, you know. I'm like NO YOU GUYS I SAW THE LIGHT. AND YOU CAN TOO

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elemersglue October 11 2010, 05:30:59 UTC
May I tempt you with a bloodied Pique to make sure you never stop writing this please? :)

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tyrannicides October 11 2010, 15:17:15 UTC

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theosakansun October 11 2010, 06:05:04 UTC
*flails*
Oh this is just all levels of cute <3

First of all, lol @ Cesc googling things he isn't supposed to be googling (i.e. things that have nothing to do with his essay). I do that all the time when I'm supposed to be studying xD

I could never have guessed that Cesc was into slight BDSM. Like, never O.O But Iker didn't seem to mind it at all, seeing as he decided to play it rough when they finally ended up having sex in the end of the chapter. And Cesc apparently got off on it as well, so it's all good. :)

I love your Kaká, both the way you've written his way of speaking (like always saying he is, not he's) and also his personality. Him and the rabbit is still one of the cutest thing ever :D I watched that interview with him in English and his accent is adorable ( ... )

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tyrannicides October 11 2010, 15:21:27 UTC
If Cesc was me, there'd be, like, 345435 searches for kitlers. When I'm writing essays, all I wanna do is look at kitlers.

That interview with Kaka is the best. It's one of the only things my non-football fan friends are totally gaga over. "We arrive with virgin" and "We just had a sex after the wedding" and variations on it have become vernacular.

I ONLY HAVE A PS2 ALSO. AND A FUCKIN WII. MAM I WANTED A 360. AND YOU GET ME WII. BC YOU WANTED WII FIT WHICH YOU NEVER PLAY AND IT SUCKS ANYWAYS. My life, so hard.

♥ Thank you.

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ttentten October 11 2010, 06:43:32 UTC
lol i'm going to reiterate everyone who has already expressed their love for the fifa 11 scene. i don't even like videogames and this made me want to play.

and this That this is who he is and he'd either been hiding it before and can't keep up the charade, or he's starting to trust Iker enough to not want to hide it anymore. Iker hopes it's the latter, but it's probably a bit of both.

aaaah... you literally do me in every time you update this and i can't wait for more. it's that good.

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tyrannicides October 11 2010, 15:23:34 UTC
This is so lame, but that part you quoted: as I was posting it I was like FFFF I AM SPLITTING AN INFINITIVE. But idgaf it flows better this way. Living on the edge.

♥ Thank you.

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rushstill October 11 2010, 08:32:16 UTC
......yeah, the fifa 11 thing. HAHAHA.

Iker clicks it with the same mix of curiosity and dread he has ever time Dr. Beckham emails him something.

becks is to iker what iker is to cesc? minus the, yknw, actual relationship part?

I REALLY REALLY LOVE THIS!!!!!!

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tyrannicides October 11 2010, 15:26:48 UTC
becks is to iker what iker is to cesc?

Yes! There was originally gonna be a lot more, like, Iker hearteying over Dr. Beckham and hero-worshiping Dr. Beckham and generally being in love with Dr. Beckham, but it kind of evolved out as I started writing. It was gonna be, like, Iker hasn't had a date in three years but IT'S OKAY WHO NEEDS A DATE WHEN DR. BECKHAM. Then that didn't really fit with how I wrote him, so I dropped it. But it's still kind of there, a little.

:] Thank you.

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rushstill October 12 2010, 15:04:33 UTC
but IT'S OKAY WHO NEEDS A DATE WHEN DR. BECKHAM.

SO TRUE. i definitely wouldn't mind more iker hearteying (i like your word ;)) over dr. beckham. they could have like a slight ~history and get cescy jealous and unable to express it!!!!!

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