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Jul 30, 2008 23:31

Title: Fooled
Pairing: Jack/Sawyer
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2360
Summary: Written for Queen
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tyrosin July 31 2008, 11:22:46 UTC

Thanks scoob2222 :)

fading_away1990 July 31 2008, 04:09:24 UTC

Loved it! You gave so much detail, I could picture it all in my mind. And sexy ending - Jack should be fooled more often. ;)

tyrosin July 31 2008, 11:24:15 UTC

Lol glad you like. I was a bit uneasy about this one because it was rushy and I didn't have time to write it properly. There was this huge thunderstorm last night and I wanted to have it finished before my power went out. :P

alemyrddin July 31 2008, 08:43:16 UTC

hee. Taking a Polaroid was such a smart idea!
This was lovely, I think Jack's striptease gave Sawyer the last push to make a move on him. ;)

And of course I absolutely loved the massage part.
Thank you so much for writing this for me!

tyrosin July 31 2008, 11:25:11 UTC

Thank you your majesty, I'm glad you liked.

elise_509 August 3 2008, 21:09:00 UTC

this was really cute, i loved that Sawyer had the thought to snap the polaroid to tease him over it all later. :)