Comments | tzzzz: The Last Days of Magic and Glory Chapter #13

tzzzz

The Last Days of Magic and Glory Chapter #13

Jun 29, 2012 05:05

In this chapter, Thor and Loki explore their evolving relationship. Warning: this chapter contains explicit content.

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magic and glory, thor/loki

Comments 6

mozzarellaroses June 29 2012, 14:35:53 UTC

Twice as hot as anything because of the passion that comes with it, and the love. Gorgeous. You shock me with how fast you update, seriously! I come back to check your LJ just because I feel like it, and I find you've updated. Amazing.

tzzzz June 29 2012, 15:03:42 UTC

Thanks! This is my first time writing sex in the pairing, which for me is always a little daunting ( ... )

mozzarellaroses June 29 2012, 15:06:16 UTC

sklgflhdfhjsaghjag That does not work half as well for me as it does for you, because it works so very well for you.

So yes, I praise you. I did get the impression this wasn't planned out per chapter, but it makes for a wonderful fic either way.

rose_of_pain July 2 2012, 04:49:24 UTC

So funny little story here. XD I saw you update this chapter on Ao3 and got very excited but I still had a bunch of things to do so I put it aside in a tab to save for the end of the day. Then the power went out due to a MASSIVE storm (which Dad and I did make a few Thor jokes about when it happened) and was out for a whole day. But it was ok because I had already put the chapter in a tab so I didn't need internet to read it. XD So it was a pretty nice read in total darkness and saved what would have otherwise been a really boring night for me. lol

But anyways, while I was surprised to see them go this far this early on, I definitely enjoyed it and was a bit giddy. Though I fear that this may be the calm before the storm. Also I laughed pretty hard at the mental image of invisible naked Loki just sitting there while poor oblivious Frigga walked into the room. XD

tzzzz July 3 2012, 06:01:03 UTC

I wouldn't say 46,000 words into the story is early on, but they did go a little farther than I expected them to (I planned no penetration) but I think for them taking physical steps are less difficult than emotional ones. It is a bit of the calm before the storm, but don't worry, they'll still be a couple at the end of this part.

rose_of_pain July 3 2012, 15:23:56 UTC

Well I meant, with the knowledge that this is going to be a series, I actually didn't think they were going to get together by the end of this first part. But I am glad that they did as the timing seemed right for them and I do love my Thorki. XD