love it when you do that thing, so insane
after you
yunho&jaejoong;
pg, romance
based on yunho's michael jackson tribute
( when you dance i can tell you apart; )
yunho&jaejoong;
pg, romance
based on yunho's michael jackson tribute
( when you dance i can tell you apart; )
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aww jaejoong waiting there to see yunho is what i'd love to imagine happened.
thanks for sharing!
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it'd be abstly sweet if that's the case ♥ you're welcome and tyfr!
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my heart skipped a beat ♥ this is breathtaking bb, it really is.
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An array of fireworks explode, spiraling above like the
unthinkable. Beneath the murmur of
disconcert an endless applause.
Hypnotic. The magic of
the moment.
This is it.
The beginning was beautiful...
and the end broke my heart...
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why do you do this to me every single time. why.
The dancer was born for the stage. As was the electric smile he’d been given. When you dance I can tell you apart.
Hypnotic. The magic of the moment. This is it.
i haven't given anyone quotebacks for forever now but i just really wanted to quote this. yunho was born for the stage, he was. i can never deny his love, his passion for dancing or anything else for that matter. the stage is his world. he's the star. he just shines anywhere, you know? and that second line i quoted, 'Hypnotic. The magic of the moment. This is it.' i absolutely loved the way you worked 'this is it' into the fic and ended promptly there. takes my breath away.
then the second bit just breaks my heart. a million and one fans, then one less. the way you said this just made everything different. i always wonder why your stories are so different from others' stories. maybe it's the way you make every single detail so extraordinary even if they're only minute differences.
But you haven’t-not for a long ( ... )
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IF I KNEW I WOULD TELL YOU.
BUT I DON'T /♥
when you love something, it becomes you. and yunho is dance. i have never seen anyone else move the way he does and that just robs me of descriptive words. he's awesome, that's all :')
i never really meant to make this turn out so sad lol. i don't want to write as if my heart is an eternal heartbreak :'( no matter what i say, no matter what i do, they'll forever be important to me. they'll forever be the priority. i feel so tired and confused all the time. as if i've been a fool. but when it comes to love, isn't everyone? :(
where is your heart?
tbh, these words i actually wrote as a reflection of myself. and dbsk often reminds me that my heart still beats. that i still love, regardless. rmb how i said that we can't truly love a person unless we know them? yet these five boys must be somebody special to let us feel the closest thing to love without even having to meet them. that's how precious they are. and i believe they are the exception - because they first showed us what love ( ... )
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I love the first part because you captured Yunho's stage charisma so perfectly with such little words. When I read that, I kept nodding and going 'yesyesyes.'
And ugh the second part. Jaejoong's hesitation and wariness is so bittersweet =(. As much as I don't blame anyone for the lawsuit and support JCS, I don't like what it's inevitably doing to their relationship, and this piece was just. UGH. I LOVED these lines:
‘You coming in?’ Yunho asks, a traitor within his voice.
Like being caught stealing the night with Jaejoong held little consequence.
He leaves the door through the exit ajar. Yet another black hole.
It’s the witching hour, but no one’s around to burn them at the stake.
But I like how the end brings a spark of hope to the hesitation. After the man he calls their leader. SOOOO touching, especially ( ... )
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admittedly, i didn't plan to write about yunho's tribute perf before but the mood struck and this is it. it's undeniable that he's got some commanding aura when he's up on stage doing his thing. so suave, rly. and idk if any of them would get into trouble if they were seen contacting each other? so i assumed that they'd both have to be cautious when it comes to cladestine meetings and yunho boldly asking jaejoong to come in with him would have made him anxious for the leader cuz jaejoong's thoughtful like that :'(♥
ps: i really hoped so too! even if he didn't go after the concert itself, he could have gone to see yunho during rehearsals ;DD
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admittedly, i didn't plan to write about yunho's tribute perf before but the mood struck and this is it.
I'm SO GLAD you wrote about this!!! ;____; This fic was perfect, bb. The realism, the bittersweetness, the dash of hope...beautiful. Plus your Ho!bias allows you to write him so well. XDDD
Yunho on stage = me not blinking until the end of his performances. *____* He amazes me with his dance the way Jaejoong amazes me with his vocals. If they're not perfect for each other, I seriously dunno who is!
so i assumed that they'd both have to be cautious when it comes to cladestine meetings
Yes, it's a trying time now definitely. In the past, even if they were together, it's not a surprise since they ARE in the same band and are good friends and lovers, but now, it just makes me a little sad that they have to be so cautious about as something as (relatively) minor as supporting each other's performances.
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