Comments | u_knowiloveyou: now i need you back in my zone

u_knowiloveyou

now i need you back in my zone

Jul 05, 2010 22:52

dark carnival
yunho&jaejoong; ot5 (feat 2pm)
pg, au, horror, drama, romance
based on L4D2 and zombieland, the movie

( # your friend is your guard )

Comments 17

dilovesyunjae July 5 2010, 15:26:34 UTC

wow................

yunhowonhi July 5 2010, 15:35:44 UTC

i hope it wasn't wow, terrible or anything lol :') thanks for reading bb!

livesmiling July 5 2010, 16:35:07 UTC

omg hi tharrrrr

dbsk ft 2PM omg.

yunhowonhi July 6 2010, 05:05:45 UTC

long time no see :)))

yaa ikr? lol ♥

am3thyst July 5 2010, 18:07:08 UTC

OMG YES!!!!!!! I didn't check email these past couple of days b/c of the 4th holiday (I live in the US), and I saw your comment this morning and I was going to show my SQUEAL when I saw this!!!!!! *goes off to read*

I apologize for the incoherent sentence above. T___T

am3thyst July 5 2010, 19:42:58 UTC

OMG, Sheryl, that was just breathtaking. This is unlike anything you'd written before and it's an AU, but I still love it. It packs a little bit of everything - action, nail-biting suspense, angst, drama, romance. It's so raw and realistic, and just...wow.

Strewn across the road are leftover scraps of sanity, tattered portions of newspaper flapping about, lifting papered wings into the sky. A dove, come to promise peace. For some reason I love this line. You paint the imagery of the decaying ruins of a civilization very well, and I can almost smell the gunfire, the rotten flesh, the coppery stench of blood; can also feel the hopelessness that hangs in the air, the boys' panic as they know that their next step may literally be their last ( ... )

yunhowonhi July 6 2010, 05:37:08 UTC

it's nice to know you found it realistic cos personally i found it rushed haha! i'm not particularly a fan of 2pm either but i thought they'd be the perfect guerilla group to insert into, afterall they're well-known for their beastly image and i kinda have a respect for jay ;D

I know all five of the boys are probably close to him, but I can't help but to think he did it for Jaejoong as well.
it's highly possible :)) the things the boys do for each other all the time. it's subtle and unspoken, but reveals the depth of their love without having to be so blatant. (i know it sounds weird that we think this way as yunjae fans, but i wouldn't put it past yunho to attend the funeral on behalf of jaejoong. i'm sure they also attend weddings as representative of the whole group if one or the other's busy etc...)

It's ironic how we would do anything for the ones we love, yet not want them to do the same for us.so, so true. love can be ~selfish~ that way ( ... )

blu_eyezz July 5 2010, 22:34:43 UTC

wow this is a gorgeous piece ^^ It reminds me a lot of Resident Evil/Shaun of the Dead & similar movies like that..
It portrays a lot of teamwork/comradeship.Its really beautiful.I was a bit worried someone was going to die but am glad they all reached safety with the help from the guys of 2PM. I was surprised how they got there so fast!hehe

AKTF <33

yunhowonhi July 6 2010, 05:42:27 UTC

lol, most zombie flicks end up vaguely similar. you know, i actually had the urge to kill someone but somehow decided against it haah! /sadist. as for the 2pm boys, i assume they're fast runners? ;DD thanks for reading, btw ♥

feelingofangst July 6 2010, 05:23:04 UTC

Wow. Just wow. This is so intense and it somehow decribes what are they feeling right now. All of them must be living like hell now. They don't know whether could they survive this, walk out of this alive. But they will always be five, keep themeselves as five. Finally faith bring them to their final destination. I love this, it made me believe that they could be five again no matter what. Thanks <3 you write beautifully!

yunhowonhi July 6 2010, 05:44:36 UTC

in a way it did :'( i hope they'll keep themselves as five friends no matter what :') you're welcome bb ♥ thanks for the comment! :D