that was bad. the trite text was made worse by the absolutely horrible imagery... i'm all for raw but there should be somethought behind it all the same. when the text says "another dark walk. no particular destination, of course"... and you draw someone walking without a particular destination... it's repetatively redundant. there's no need for it - lose one or the other... same thing with the lighter in the rain... repetition... show it again and again and again - there's a reason for it being in visual form. draw it over and over again until the viewer gets as sick of looking at it as you are of living it... that, at least, would be something... this... this is thoughtless tripe. you must have better ways to kill your time than this... i've taught illustration classes to 14 y/o's who did far better work than this.
Re: shut up youezr_2stalk_wljFebruary 23 2005, 02:08:11 UTC
love anonymous. always the same coward, same simplistic posts, no matter who he is... the anonymous constant. i challenge you to find anything untrue or unhelpful in that comment of mine. then, perhaps, i'll shut up.
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the trite text was made worse by the absolutely horrible imagery... i'm all for raw but there should be somethought behind it all the same.
when the text says "another dark walk. no particular destination, of course"... and you draw someone walking without a particular destination... it's repetatively redundant. there's no need for it - lose one or the other... same thing with the lighter in the rain... repetition... show it again and again and again - there's a reason for it being in visual form. draw it over and over again until the viewer gets as sick of looking at it as you are of living it... that, at least, would be something... this... this is thoughtless tripe.
you must have better ways to kill your time than this... i've taught illustration classes to 14 y/o's who did far better work than this.
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always the same coward, same simplistic posts, no matter who he is... the anonymous constant.
i challenge you to find anything untrue or unhelpful in that comment of mine. then, perhaps, i'll shut up.
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