9.8 m/s²

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Title: 9.8 m/s²
Pairing: SeLuKai (Sehun / Luhan / Kai)
Length: One-shot
Genre: Tragedy, Romance, Angst
Summary: Sehun is trapped in a makeshift wonderland. Luhan keeps on chucking scientific equations out of the window. And Jongin, good old Jongin, oozes sex appeal and tension as comfortably as a teacher might sprout out historical facts to a

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SPOT
you don't know me, I don't know me
but my OT3 feels are huge
I will read over night I think and be back to comment!

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Omg i'll be waiting person i dont know who doesnt know herself ;}

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*himself, actually haha
okay I read the first paragraohs until I fell asleep because I've been awake for around 22 hours so yeah I will sleep and finish this because OMG I LOVE IT ALREADY. yes. ah. I am so tired I can't even express my feelings.
see you when Im done recharching!

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OKAY )._.) WAIT A MOMENT. I have to look up what I marked and please prepare, it's A LOT and I'm not good at commenting haha

Luhan brings the outside world into the walls of his place with the aid of blended colors and crying water patterns. Thanks to the genius resting on Luhan’s fingertips, Sehun sees the real world without having to be there.

“Hello,” The stranger has a deep, husky voice that makes him think of sex and kitchen countertops.
//YES OMG YES

They met on a particularly chilly night (by accident), and happen to stick beside each other since then (on purpose).

Neither of them knew the right words to say, so they breathed in oxygen and breathed out empty hearts and empty lungs.
//melts because you probably know how much I love metaphors with nature.

“Anywhere, you can place him in a garbage dump, and he’ll scrape his way to the top."

Baekhyun’s just here to appreciate the waiters’ rear. Now that is a very fine piece of art.
THIS IS MY KIND OF HUMOR OKAY

When I die, Sehun had told him as he press a rose petal to the

[kanji00]

i have a secret thing for equations and then equations and ot3's and "sehun or jongin, or anything else that falls, will always kiss the ground with the same acceleration" was my favorite line, i'm not making sense because u've somehow dragged my secret thing for equations out into the open and now i can't do physics without thinking of painters and ashes and rose petals 8|

all secret things aside, i like how in the end, the only thing they don't do is die together - it's the pure definition of bittersweet, and you can really see the difference in his acceptance of sehun's death and jongin's death. i also noticed some minor textual mistakes, just wanted to point that out in case u wanted to go back and look it over ><"

thanks for writing! ~ :) <3

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hohooho, thanks for the comment! :)
I'm not a huge fan of equations, but 9.8 m/s2 is vital so..

awww, thank you! I'll make sure to correct them & no, thank you for reading and commenting ;}

[lekikoz]

Casually stalking all your fics and may i just say - this is so beautifully written. I love the way you manage to incorporate past lovers into this.. My fav part though was the last scene of when luhan was old. Things like that always get to me :')

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casually dying because of feels~
thank you so much for reading & commenting.
I'm glad you liked it &* i always try to cut scenes like the ending as short as possible because too much heartbreak ;~;

[mayaisthename]

I felt really sad (like teary-eyed sad but only because i couldn't bawl my eyes out with my friends around) reading this fic. I felt really, really sad for Sehun because I don't know (maybe because he's my precious and him dying here is just like NOOOOOO MY PRECIOOOOUUUSSSS!!!).. he was just a really sad person, and even when Luhan was with him, Luhan couldn't save him. I felt like Luhan just stayed with him but he didn't really do anything. Like he held out his hand to a drowning man but he didn't pull and so they're both drowning and Sehun has to let go because he doesn't really blame Luhan rather he feels guilty and that makes him sadder. I really don't know. I kinda hate Luhan a little because he gave up. But I can't say I wouldn't do the same if it was me. At some point I think, he fell out of love, or maybe he just didn't know how to love, or maybe he did love but not THAT kind of love

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this made me really glad, for some reason :)

your comment captured this whole fic and i love you for that. i can't disagree this is actually a sad thing may i recommend some of zitaos fic? she's in lj and i really look up to her. her fics just idk are fluffy and nice and yeaaah a perfect cure :)

[mayaisthename]

I know her! i mean i read her fics. her fics are sooo amazing. i'm actually new to all this fanfic and shipping thing but hunhan got me into this and now i'm addicted to reading fanfics that i had to make an lj. i'm soo glad i came across your fics. i love your vampire fics too :)

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/throws confetti/

welcome then!
once you're sucked in, there's no turning back.

aawww i feel you. idk exactly how i got into this business thingy JDFOWE I WANT TO KNOW YOU MORE and like, suck you in further into this painful life. i'm ien btw :) hi maya~