[One-Shot] Behind Closed Eyelids

[ueboaffection]

Title: Behind Closed Eyelids

Pairing: Maruda, with special appearance by Akanishi and Masuda.

Rating: PG

Genre: AU, angst, romance, fluff

Disclaimer: Do not own anything.

Summary: People had always said that ‘time heals’, but Yuichi thought that time only blurred the past. When he closed his eyes; behind those closed eyelids - he could only see his

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[chuckles0505]

Yuichi, why are you so oblivious and dumb >________<
Arghhhh, I kept wanting to smack some sense into him.

Thank goodness for sensible Massu. Massu nomming on his cookie and being the voice of reason ^^
I love that he added this random fact, “Did you know that in some places, balloon releasing events are prohibited?” LOL Soukon!Massu and his random trivia ♥
Yes, he is excellent in this :D

*cough* back to Maruda
Why are you so good at angst-ing Maruda T_________T
MY HEART ;A;
All the little moments that they had together were so lovely like when they were holding hands lying in bed ;_________;
And then my favorite lines of the entire story:
Holding hands, hugging, invading each other’s personal spaces - they all felt natural. The relationship that we have; I feel that it’s almost as natural as the changing seasonsComfortable Maruda and their marriedness

[snowaltz]

Happy Birthday to you! ♪(*^^)o∀*∀o(^^*)♪

[chuckles0505]

Thank you!

[ueboaffection]

lol I'm glad the Masuda inserts are enjoyable :D

While writing this, I also noticed how my stories are usually angst-filled lol.
And to be honest I love that holding hands while lying in bed thing too XD

I kept editing that scene of him with Jin, especially that line. I'm so happy to have gone with it since it turns out to be your favourite line ^^

omg I'm so, so relieved to hear that. As always, your comment made me smile from ear to ear.
You're welcome Emily <333 Hope you had a great birthday :) /squishes you back

[snowaltz]

Whoa, this fic just clutches my heart in all the right way, I totally enjoyed it. It's so like Yucchi to be not confident of Tacchan actually loving him :P

And I haven't read Jinda in a very long while, it's refreshing :P

Looking forward to more fics from you when you have time/feel inspired ;)

[ueboaffection]

Glad to know you enjoyed it!

And well, it's past!Jinda but I guess it works ... XD

I'll do my best in updating 'From me to you' It has been ages since it's updated .__.
Thank you for the comment :)

[snowaltz]

I'm definitely looking forward to more of From Me to You! :D

[ueboaffection]

I'll do my best! :D

Btw I haven't seen you around as much, and I just saw your post on your recent sighting of Sho! That sounds like an amazing experience :D

[bellemainec]

this was very sweet and adorable, and I loved Massu with the opinions and trivia and support, and Jin with the working things out and trying to help them both. The balloons was a lovely touch as well. Enjoyable read, thanks for sharing!

[ueboaffection]

Yay I'm happy to know Masuda's appearance in this is well received lol

Thank you for reading and commenting! <3

[apple_tira_pie]

*sniffs*

The emotions behind all this felt very real and falls in the right places. The way the angst and the tension gradually increasing between them and suddenly that brief separation followed by realization. Oh Yuichi you baka! And stop being such a worry wart environmentalist haha

Massu! ♥♥♥♥♥ Perfect companion. Only him can bring some sense to Yuichi.

I especially love the white curtain scene. It appropriate before that final confession.

Eza, this probably your best work ever. Thanks for sharing!

[ueboaffection]

/gets teary eyed

The emotions behind all this felt very real and falls in the right places.
I feel so extremely glad to know that :')
and lol I guess Yucchi is a bit too oblivious in this ... xD

Happy to hear that Massu is receiving a positive feedback in this ;D

omg really? You don't know how much that means to me. I should be thanking you, so thank you. Thank you for this lovely comment :)

[kazushirra_13]

gyaaaaaaaaaaaaah~!!!! :D this is sooooooooo cute! Oh my gosh! Whooo~ *inhale exhale!*

[ueboaffection]

omg calm down, haha ^^;

I'm glad that you find this to be cute. Thanks for reading & commenting!

[kazushirra_13]

gyaaaaah~ it's because I was so speechless and all I can see was GYAAAAAAAAAH.. and it was nice. Lols. You're welcome. I will read all of your fanfictions!! They're nice!!! :D
Please make more!! hahaha! :D I know I sound a bit demanding but they're really CUTE and.. and just.. GYAAAAAAAAH!!

Arigatoooou~!!!

[ueboaffection]

Haha, I feel that you are a very cute person from reading this comment :) I will do my best to write good fanfics, so I hope you'll look forward to them.

No, thank YOU for taking the time to read and comment! I am honoured to have you reading my writings ^^