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Fic: Right There Around The Corner

Nov 03, 2009 10:28

Title: Right There Around The Corner
Author: Ria
Rating: NC-17 / MA
Pairing: Laura/Kara
Spoiler: none, I'd say
Summary: frustration, drinks, cigars and sex
Disclaimer: Characters are property of RDM and Universal Pictures.
Author's Note: This is my first (official) venture into femslash land. No idea if I failed or not... so constructive critique ( Read more... )

fic, fic: bsg, series: bsg, pairing: laura/kara

Comments 6

sira01 November 3 2009, 19:57:56 UTC

I really, really love how you created a downright erotic atmosphere in this story. And what I loved most is that this story plays in a different timeline but it IS Laura and it IS Kara. For me, you nailed them and you made me believe they could have had secks...
This will remain one of my favorite femslash stories!
Thanks a bunch for sharing.

ufp13 November 4 2009, 05:33:36 UTC

Thank you, hon! I'm pleased you think so. *hugs*

shayenne November 3 2009, 20:50:52 UTC

I love it! I like Kara's "blasting eyes" and the sheer heat in this story.

Great job!

ufp13 November 4 2009, 05:31:40 UTC

O.O Thank you! :)

lynchgrrrl88 November 8 2009, 11:51:58 UTC

this was excellent! You really captured the characters perfectly and, i may add, it was an extremely hot story!

ufp13 November 8 2009, 11:55:58 UTC

Thank you! :)
Happy to hear you enjoyed it.