Chapter 1: Corruption

[uhlisuh]

I cry inside, but those cries are quickly silenced and forgotten before they are even manifested. Abruptly, his face turns to face mine now there is a bitter frustration and grief swelled up from the teary liquid in his eyes. Struck by the penetration of such a glare, I hide my shock in lowering my head, looking down this time in guilt. My eyes

Comments

[henrwhy]

Crazy. Keep it up. I want more chapters.

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[anonymous]

Wow, your ‘blog’ is anything but one. I must say its very articulate and extremely poetic, good job =]. I understand what your saying, but then again sometimes no matter how much you try or they try there’s never a transfer of emotion. No one can ever feel what you feel. . .

[torturedxchaos]

AHHHHHH . . . I dislike creative writing. Why? Because I'm not good at it myself. LOL . . . but honestly, good work, but still, I don't like creative writing. =P

[anonymous]

wow.. thats awesome! your a great writer! =)