Always - Chapter 8

Mar 17, 2009 22:52

Title: Always
Rating: Fiction Rated: PG-13
Author: ulaylablue

Summary: AU fic.  Gabriel is a lovably clueless watchmaker and Elle is his sexually frustrated neighbor.  Watch as hijinks ensue.

Some of you have asked about the status of M&M Gray.  I need more inspiration before I tackle that one again but in the meantime, hope you enjoy more of Always.

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lemomina March 18 2009, 07:20:00 UTC
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
I should be in my way to college right now but i couldn't stop myself from reading and commenting .

Awesome Funny Chapter , the fight scene was hilarious and Nathan saying “What? This is a new suit!” made me laugh so hard

“no, not his face!” this like killed me !!

ps: I only read this version , i didn't read the one in the mail

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ulaylablue March 18 2009, 16:48:02 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. And I had to put Nathan in there. He is such a chump sometimes. A good looking chump, but still a chump.

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di_elle March 18 2009, 09:56:19 UTC
ah ah ah thanks! peter smack on the wall LOL! and the fistfight! and obviously Elle was hit... I don't know why but again, this time, a movie scene come to my mind: the fight between mark darcy and daniel cleaver in bridget jones... LOL!

(you should post it at sylarelle, you forgot it...)

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ulaylablue March 18 2009, 16:50:01 UTC
Thanks for the reminder! I just posted it there.

Hahah, this fight does seem like the one in Bridget Jones Diary. Thanks for reminding me about that - I love that scene!

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faded_facade March 18 2009, 14:00:10 UTC
Haha, yes! Fist fight between a nurse and a watchmaker, I love it.

I laughed so hard at Nathan being all "This is a new suit!" and I'm sure Angela was yelling "no, not his face!".

Great chapter as usual. :D

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ulaylablue March 18 2009, 17:00:27 UTC
Hehe, thanks! Sometimes boys just need to work out their aggressions.

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dela26 March 18 2009, 21:06:01 UTC
The image of Elle upside down, dress pulled up, and flashing the party her thong was priceless.

And then later, someone screaming: “no, not his face!” after Gabriel punched Peter was sooooo freaking hilarious, I almosted peed my pants from laughter.

What an awesome, action-packed, and comical chapter! Well done!!! ;-)

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ulaylablue March 18 2009, 21:43:06 UTC
Aww, thanks!! :) Good to hear you thought this chapter was so funny. I was hoping people would get a kick out of it.

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d_wndy March 19 2009, 04:47:33 UTC
love it! but it's about time gabriel and elle really talk! cant wait for the next ch :D

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ulaylablue March 19 2009, 16:32:15 UTC
Yeah, things are winding down with this story. It'll be nice to finally get some resolution and for Elle to tell Gabe that she really does love Peter.

j/k of course!

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