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HHYL FanFic - Ch. 1

Nov 27, 2015 11:59

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Comments 16

captaintsukiko November 28 2015, 16:32:51 UTC

from the get go, I can see youre very descriptive. its not a bad thing, its great actually. i can say you have me wanting more, I hope to see more of this soon! :D

ulli_blu November 28 2015, 16:37:46 UTC

Thanx :-) And yes, that's my style. I know it's not everyones cup of tea, but I like to read very descriptive stories, too ;-) and writing in English is so much harder than in German, puh ;-)

captaintsukiko November 30 2015, 14:42:43 UTC

Well, I like lots of description too, really 😗 descriptive style are always a great read when the writer shows more than tells. I know that feeling yes.. Writing in the mother language is easier... Since English is a difficult language to be honest *_*;;

soulezz November 30 2015, 06:52:10 UTC

o(^▽^)o

ulli_blu December 1 2015, 11:13:28 UTC

:-)

Daebak !!! anonymous November 30 2015, 08:01:14 UTC

Good to go .... i am totally like it .

RE: Daebak !!! ulli_blu December 1 2015, 11:13:39 UTC

:-)

chica_dominican November 30 2015, 17:29:16 UTC

Hi Ulli-Blu!

This FF is very interesting and well developed... I like when the main character is in danger, especially when is a man!!!

Buen trabajo!!

ulli_blu December 1 2015, 11:21:24 UTC

Me too ;-)

redturtle95 November 30 2015, 19:54:57 UTC

Omf i got so excited when i saw this that i accidentally whacked my head with my bean pillow

Nuuuu poor lu cang

redturtle95 November 30 2015, 20:17:33 UTC

I dont know whether this is coincidence or not, but im super impressed with the research done on the name, dialect, and HT's place of origin.

When i first saw his name i immediately thought it sounded viet, and vietnam (yue nan) has historical and cultural roots a southern province in imperial china. I was really happy when you wrote that hes from Yue province! 😭😘😘😘

ulli_blu December 1 2015, 11:21:02 UTC

Huhu,

oh thanx:-) yes, I try to be as accurate as possible when it comes to names and language. But it's not easy since I don't speak any asian language ;-) I studied history many years ago, and I'm quite firm with european history from middle ages to modern times, so it is a great treat for me to dig deeper into asian history for this fanfic. I'm always thankfull for advise when I get something wrong :-)
Hope to update with some sexy times between the couple this week