Secrets I'm Dying To Keep

[umai_jae_ai]

Title: Secrets I'm Dying To Keep
Genre: Angst
Rating: Pg-13
Paring: Jaejoong-centric
Summary: Jaejoong is slowly being worn down.
A/N: I'm thinking of extending this, depending on the reviews I get(if i get any). If I extend it, I'm planning on doing a pairing so if there are any suggestions for a specific pair, then they're more than welcome. And

Comments

[tftcproductions]

wow. Really emotional. Such caring Umma!Jae going through so much, really tugs the heart strings *remembers ending of Moulin Rouge* ...omfg...

If we r suggesting couples ... Yunjae ^.^. 4 sizzle i think it would fit. (bonehead Jae finally giving in to Yunnie the bear)This fic is so well written and i so can't wait till more *puppy dog eyes*

[umai_jae_ai]

Oh the ending of Moulin Rouge was so sad*cries alittle* lol, Yunjae was the couple I originally had in mind, but now with so many different opinions, I'm not quite sure who I plan to use, but no matter what at least I know there are other Yunjae fans out there lol.

Thankyou so much for commenting.

[tftcproductions]

Really I'm up for any couple, its just *looks around* *motions for u to get closer* please no jaesu or jaechun, they cry. Emo!Jae needs one of the semes. Just my opinion

[umai_jae_ai]

lol, yea you do have a point, in his current condition Jae would need someone strong. So far it looks like the leading contestant is Changmin, but it's still gonna be a tough decision...*sighs* *cries in a corner* why me?!?!? lol

[dapdaphae]

This is wonderfully dark and I hope you do extend it~

I think... I'd like to see yunjae, actually. Yunho seems to be the most equipped in helping a broken!jae because they've gone through so much together.... ;___; must i remind you of how jae stayed with yunnie at the hospital during the anti-fan incident and how yun was always very careful with jae when he broke his leg. *throws more bias all over the place*

Plus. yun is manly. jae loves pointing that out.

cheers ♥

[umai_jae_ai]

Thankyou for reading and commenting. Yunho was the 1 I originally had in mind, and you make some really good points(like the fact that they're really in love with eachother j/k lol) They care for eachother so much so it would make alot of sense for it to be Yunho, but there are so many jaemin fans requesting otherwise lol, I'm not sure yet, we'll just have to see. Thanks again for commenting.

[pavor_nocturnum]

Wow

I'm sorry I may not be able to comment as well as the others, but I can tell you this definitely had me interested and I hope to read more

Pairings? I'd say either jaejoong/changmin or jaejoong/yoochun. Although...Changmin might be stronger character for what might happen in a storyline like this....If that makes sense

[umai_jae_ai]

Thanks for commenting and reading! Yea most people think that it should be Changmin over some of the others because he's stronger and could help jae more, so it makes perfect sense. Thankyou

[chai_tea88]

you HAVE to extend this. plzzzzzzz??!!!!!
as for pairing, definitely jaemin. changmin just strikes me as having the strength of character, logic of mind and depth of soul to be able to stand by jaejoong and help him in so many ways possible.

even though i am a yunho fangirl, yunjae is just too over-done.

[umai_jae_ai]

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Jaemin is definitely in the lead right now, but I'm still not sure, we'll have to see. Thankyou for the help and for reading.

[chloe1910]

ZOMG! So much angst but the emotion was brilliantly written and really power packed. It went straight to my heart and gut...I feel so bad for Jae...

Coughing out bIood that frequent sound scary. I don't think it's advisable for him to hide his condition...I know he's under a lot of stress but I think he needs help...

Please do continue..

[umai_jae_ai]

Thankyou so much for reading and commenting, it's greatly appreciated.=D