[fic] Shimmering Blue (chapter 3)

[umeboshi_heart]

Title: Shimmering Blue
Pairing: Jaemin (main)
Genre: AU, supernatural/fantasy/non-human, angst, romance
Warning: underage-went-wrong, WTFs, minor torture/violence, possible annoying!min
Rating: PG-NC-17/R
Summary:
Until some springs ago he still enjoyed being enveloped by the current or leaping from one rock to another without asking things

Comments

[umeboshi_heart]

WHOA!!!! AMAZINGNESS!! xD

[umeboshi_heart]

oh, believe me, the annoying min I stated above isn't in this chapter *put on an evil-disgusting face*

Thanks for the comment! *SMOOCH* xD

[one_milky_smile]

FREEZEEEEEEEEEE MY SPOTTTTTTT

[one_milky_smile]

okay, seriously, I don't think Min is annoying at alll. He's so cuteeee *squeal* or maybe it's because I have a Min bias me want more annoying!Min like this~~~~~ Curiosity is cute~~~~ He still has a lot to learn abt human life *sighs* but hopefully Jae'll be there for him~~~

And I'd like to have a Min like that to bring home, please, I want to pinch that boy's cheek and squeeze cuteness out of him!!!!!!!!!!

Omo, what is Jae doing *giggles* Can it be considered as Min's first kiss *giggles* Jae hasn't get over Yunho, right *sighs* and my imagination tells me that they did a lot of inappropriate things *giggles*

update moarrrrrrrrrr~~~~

p/s: me still wait for nine-tailed fox to come and shake things up *giggles*

[umeboshi_heart]

yeah, hopefully jae will be there for him!

omooooo how can you think about more inapropriate things, they're only 11! (<-- is a hypocryte) tsk tsk tsk.... how can you be so pedo like this? bad bad girlll *spank*

oh, Xiah will shakes things up dun worry... xD

Thank you for reading!

[one_milky_smile]

no no no, me no pedo *shakes head* me only pedo for Jaemin *giggles* and also, you let one 11 years old boy and a...uhm... smaller boy having french-kiss on the bed at night *giggles* that is so pedo (which I don't object at all, keep up the GOOD work)~~~~~~

p/s: thank u for writing~~~

[adorable_hotaru]

SPOT! Am I third?

[adorable_hotaru]

Yes I'm third ^_^... will be back after my big day event today... my graduation commencement YAY \(^0^)/... this will be my graduation present XD

[adorable_hotaru]

awww... Changmin is so cute when he doesn't understand human customs XD... the late night TV scene is... epic XD. Though the way Jae treating Min gave me a mix feeling... is he take care and treat Min because he WANT to help him out of kindness and think he simply adorable way or he treat him like a pet that need to be pamper and another way to help him forget his loneliness and Yunho in general... maybe I thinking too much... but I can't help but feel there is something in/to it T.T... I hope I'm wrong.

[umeboshi_heart]

maybe both, you're not really wrong, because i think kids don't think about reason why they do something, they just do...
(but then again kids don't do french kiss on the bed yet jae do... OH WELL GAHAHA!) xD

[jaesmintea]

*squeals*

New update!

[jaesmintea]

I would do anything to have this two boys with me. I will cuddle them both. The underage-went-wrong Jaejoong is.. aigoo I'm speechless... I just love him and soon-not-to-be-so innocent Min is so cute. I smile at the entire moment, Jaejoong is like a guardian angel to Min. Baby, how I worship that call xD. Everything feels so wonderful. There are so many adorable scenes in this chapter but my favorite would be the one when Jaejoong fed Min and the part when Jaejoong enjoyed the adult is making me lol. I'm having a great time reading this chapter Umeboshi-chan. You're definitely as awesome as ever. <333

[jaesmintea]

Oh about the kiss, well I just wanna say good job Jaejoong hehe.. My imagination about what is wrong with the boys will lead me to not-so-appropriate-to-kids theory and since they're just eleven I should kill myself for thinking that way xDD.

[umeboshi_heart]

hahahaha yeaahhh we all love innocent kids turning not so innocent (or is it just me?? xD) ohh im glad you like that scene! (and I miss seeing jae feeds min really uhuhuhuhuhu)

nooo you shouldn't kill yourself, let's celebrate your dirty mind for a world of pedo jaemin akahahahahaha xDD

*hugs*

[quixoticfox]

SPOTOTOTO!J!N!!

[quixoticfox]

Damn, I'm still late >:( WHYYY. Going to do my readings now. Bleah school D: But I'll be back before I go to bed!

[quixoticfox]

Whaaa they are both so cute! Min is seriously a baby, Jaejoong's nickname for him suits him so well! And jaejoong is so mature for his age! Must be tough growing up without his parents around. Aww, is Yunho gone already?

[umeboshi_heart]

yeah, Yunho is gone for now, hehehe xD

lol jae is mature? Well I guess he has some mature sides (aside of not wanting milk and veggies hehehe)

Thankies!