[fic] Shimmering Blue (chapter 5)

[umeboshi_heart]

Title: Shimmering Blue
Pairing: Jaemin (main)
Genre: AU, supernatural/fantasy/non-human, angst, romance
Warning: underage-went-wrong, WTFs, minor torture/violence, possible annoying!min
Rating: PG-NC-17/R
Summary:
Until some springs ago he still enjoyed being enveloped by the current or leaping from one rock to another without

Comments

[kurogoma]

He looked down to check his right sole. The black spirals were fading.

i couldn't remember why that's important......enlighten me?

is changmin on borrowed time? :(

and poor jaemin. they desperately want each other, but not being able to freely express them is causing them to lash out at each other.

[umeboshi_heart]

no, I indeed haven't explained why it's important xD In the previous chapter Changmin hadn't even know what it was

everything would be clearer later on, thanks for reading!

[umeboshi_heart]

HAHAHAHAHHA I HURT YOUR HEEAARRRTTTT xDD

and you really challenge me to come to your dream don't u. Hmm.. You don't know how awesome I'll be in ragged bikini.

About the spiral... hmm... kind of like that but not quite right, but kudos for you for guessing xD

thank you for the comment! xD

[windapaoline]

Omg... You make my heart beating fast when I read this...
Wonder who was the one texted Min, and I wonder why he had to clean jaejoong's taste when he's so mad in love with jae..
And i was about to cry when min struggling from his phobia.. *smacks jae for that*

anyway, i'll still stalk ur fic :)

[umeboshi_heart]

hihihihi whyyy?? xD

aww u'll know soon... xD and you still stalk this?? LET'S MEET IN OUR DREAM xD

thankieeesss xD

[ansuka]

SPOT....
almost in the back but anyway.
I'll read later

[ansuka]

wow.....
this as really confusing.......

So, this seems like they were together in the orphanate but..... maybe something happened there... and Changmin cleaning his mouth after the kiss.....
maybe someone saw them and tell Changmin that that is really wrong... or something.....

and JJ using the fire to scare him.... wow.... I don't know why but it doesn't seem like the first time for me.... They seem to be tired of the other..... and did JJ accuse Changmin like that.... maybe he blame him for what happened in this all time.... they seem to not have money, but JJ was rich when he was a kid. or maybe because he doesn't have parents now....
And that cold and tiring and.... monoton..ash *don't remember the word in english T_T* freak me out.

As JAejoong said.... where did hIS Changmin went?.... what happened because the two of them are soooo changed.... and Jaejoong got another boyfriend... what happened with aaaall the love that Changmin used to felt for him >and that person that send the msg to CM mmmm.... IDK

[umeboshi_heart]

OMG I lol so much at your misread coke into cock and your pity for jaexDDDDDD

yeah, yeah.... something is happened... and they're just frustrated about it. wow so much at your speculations *hug you* hihihihi i hope I can update soon so everything's become clear, thank u so much for the awesome comment! XD

[ansuka]

naaa girl
thank you

I'm loving this so much ♥
I love angsty because it hurt and it makes me think and makes me want to kill the author.. yeah... you :DDD
But I like what you've write so far... so I'm here ^^

AND IS JAEMIN
how can I not read this?
;w;

now im sad again

[choclavenderjm]

rollercoaster emotion in my mind again...im crazy....sad and *sigh*
thanks for updating

Re: now im sad again

[umeboshi_heart]

lol sorryyy *hugs*

thanks for reading!