[fic] Shimmering Blue (chapter 9)

[umeboshi_heart]

Title: Shimmering Blue
Pairing: Jaemin (main)
Genre: AU, supernatural/fantasy/non-human, angst, romance
Warning: underage-went-wrong, WTFs, minor torture/violence, possible annoying!min, angst and sap
Rating: PG-NC-17/R
Summary:
Until some springs ago he still enjoyed being enveloped by the current or

Comments

[vhii1217]

I've read and i love it so much. Like, soooooo much. I'll tell you properly once i get back to my laptop okay? I'm confined on a bed again, this time because of typhoid =____=

btw you wrote 'ambitious asses who want to finish junior high in 2 years' and i feel like dipping myself to atlantic. I finished junior high in 2 years. Does it make me an ass? TTTT_______TTTT

thx for the long chappie, bb <3

[umeboshi_heart]

typhoid?? Muhu. Why are u always sick?? xD

and yeah, u're ambitious ass!! But since I needed 4 years to finish high school, that makes me useless ass so im not even better.

Hm. *turn away shamefully*

*but seriously I felt that 4 years is not enough, I still want more highschool, how can someone choose to pass highschool in 2 years????)

[vhii1217]

i don't wanna be sick~ i mean, we have lebaran on 10 sept and my birthday is on 12th, and on 11th i was diagnosed typhoid. how gloomy is that? TT_____TT

huhuhuuuu me is not ambitious ass! just your innocent little dongsaeng, no? *puppy eyes*

*cough*bythewayyoursmutisreallygettingbettersocongratsbabyhehehe*cough*

on with the story~

i'm so FREAKING in love with the past reminiscence. the orphanage life looks... dynamic, hehe. the kids were a bit pathetic but are cute enough. priest!siwon is the best, haha. the birthday party in the warehouse~ aww cutie jae and minnie. i don't know that kind of activity could be described as... cute. but what they were doing is cute in my opinion (or i'm just twisted that way)

i miss innocent clingy minnie too, where did he go?? *looks around* really, if minnie disappears from jae's life for good, i'll go find xiah-sshi, kill him, kill you, and then kill myself. so don't ever dare separate them for good okay? XD

[umeboshi_heart]

ehhh?? HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! xDD *throws you chapsalduk and the video of jaemin smut*

im glad priest!siwon stole your attention!

when u start thinking that smut is cute that means you start to get rotten. Which is good.

*evil laughter*

[ansuka]

“Then why are you here? Why don’t you just disappear!?”

There was a silence as the reality struck. Changmin’s eyes moistened as he continued stroking the other guy’s hair. “I will… one day, I will disappear, I will leave you… “ He whispered, still forcing a smile. “That’s why you should find another guy you might-“

“No!!” Jaejoong cut the line and shook Changmin’s collars in panic. “I don’t want another person! I want you! Don’t leave me!”

T_______T
I'm reallyyyyyyy bussy righ now. I can't comment how VoldeMmin command but I'll be back latter

[umeboshi_heart]

GOOD LUCK BABY!!! xD lol voldemin xD

[ansuka]

I'm free now x_x

.............. and I forgot what I wanted to said =__= I've been thinking of this all week....

anyway.. I love this. I love this Changmin and I'm so fucking in love with this Jaejoong ♥ ........ gosh He is soooo in love of Changmin. He take care of him and the 'welcome back home' makes me KANSDLKSADBN,JSADBMSJDVJ ♥

I kind of think that maybe Changmin doesn't really understand how much Jaejoong loves him, it's not something that you could stop doing and change it.... Jaejoong was suppost to be in love with Yunho, but he doesn't even remember him... when Changmin came to his life he forgot about everything.

And that first time was so........ them. Changmin just letting Jaejoong do as he want. And Jaejoong didn't knew how to do things and just wanted more ♥ Actually that is how really first times are *remember...remember...*

I love this and I love youuuuuuuuuu~~~~~~
Can I add U?
please please please :3

[umeboshi_heart]

you should! It's said red bean ice cream but believe me the taste is like watermelon, it's not too sweet, not too think,, ohhhooooo really yummy *chapsalduk pimpin*

lol this chapter is supposed to be a happy one but why everyone's sad?? xD

[jaceni]

Flashbacks always seem depressing because it shows how happy they once were, but something is bugging me. Didn't you say that they both lost it to each other on their 15th birthday? I only saw Changmin lose it not Jae, lol. Anyway, great chapter and hope you can update soon. Love the length, if only more chapters were this long. :) Poor Max, trying to prepare Hero for his absence. :( Great story and can't wait for more. :D

[umeboshi_heart]

did you mean Jae's first was with Yunho? Hmm it depends on your pov I think, in my pov a person is still a virgin even after a blowjob hehehe so I concluded that Jae was still a virgin after that incident with Yunho.... xD

Im glad you like this chapter, thank you for reading!

[jaceni]

Haha, I know techniqually they did lose their virginity together, but I thought it unfair that Max was the only one on "bottom" and in pain, while Jae actually enjoyed it. I thought Jae also was on "bottom" the same day. Has Jae ever been in the bottom during sex? Just wondering, lol. Anyway, hope that clarified what I meant. :)

[umeboshi_heart]

OH I UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU MEAN!!!!

but if that's the case.... most of the guys in this world still virgin!! xDD LOL even the fathers.... xD
eh but then... I wrote 'they gave themselves to each other', not 'they lost it to each other', so I'm literally neutral, MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!! *is proud of herself*
I think if Jae meet Xiah he'd be bottom. pihihihi xD

[waiting4_moon]

long chappy hurrayyy~~~
brb

[umeboshi_heart]

HAH!! THIS IS FOR YOU MY DEAR!!!

PANJANG KANNN??? PANJANG KAANN??? HAYOOOHHH!!!