Comments | umeko_star: fic: There is a time and place for this sort of thing. 3/3

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fic: There is a time and place for this sort of thing. 3/3

Nov 10, 2011 00:20

Title: There is a time and place for this sort of thing. Part 3.
Author: umeko_star
Rating: NC-17 (for smutty sexiness)
Word Count: 6,042
Disclaimer: to love something, you have to set it free. Therefore, I can't own NBC/Community
Summary: Jeff and Annie journey through self discovery, and what they mean to themselves before they evaluate what they ( Read more... )

jeff/annie, community, fanfiction

Comments 19

na_thalia November 10 2011, 09:05:08 UTC

I liked it! The evolution of their relationship was dramatic but not rushed so it didn't feel strange or overdone that they slept together and wanted to go to New York together right away.

I know the crush of oncoming papers... I have to face mine too ;-< Good luck!

umeko_star November 13 2011, 21:48:35 UTC

thank you thank you thank you! <3 good luck on your papers as well. =(

fandrastic November 10 2011, 13:48:25 UTC

okay I can't leave a full review now but let me tell you that this is, without a doubt, absolutely perfect.

PERFECT.

umeko_star November 13 2011, 21:49:53 UTC

hello, i wish i knew your real name so i can bless you for all eternity. but in my mind, i just call you fantastic. HUGS ALL AROUND. you stuck with this story to the end and i'm just so grateful for your feedbacks and comments, they made my months.
<3

classicfreak November 10 2011, 16:07:26 UTC

EVERYTHING WAS JEFF/ANNIE AND NOTHING HURT!
EVERYTHING WAS AWESOME! Abed, you creepy awesome dude you! Troy and Britta, 4 FOR YOU UMEKO! YOU GO UMEKO!

to reiterate fandrastic - PERFECT!

umeko_star November 13 2011, 21:51:14 UTC

UGH JEFF/ANNIE COULD HEAL THE WORLD OF ITS CORRUPTION AND SADNESS. HAIL ABED! HAIL TRITTA/TROTTA(?)/BROY?! HAIL THE MIGHTY JEFF/ANNIE.

thanks so much for reading commenting. <3

classicfreak November 13 2011, 22:02:51 UTC

Can the Britta/Troy relation have all those names because they are all awesome.
Thanks for writing such an amazing story.

teruel_a_witch November 10 2011, 20:57:21 UTC

!!!!!! The sound that came out of my mouth when I saw this had been posted was not human, I've been following this story since the first chapter was posted and couldn't wait for the resolution, I'm hardcore in love with this fic, it's just what I'd wanted after the UN episode and more (I'd even left a prompt back then for a fic which would explore a situation where Jeff and Annie try to "keep respectable distance" but fail because they miss each other terribly but this is so much better and deeper and enhanced than I could have imagined) Just, basically, gah

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teruel_a_witch November 10 2011, 21:12:52 UTC

Just a tiny little thing that I noticed (posting as a separate comment so that you could delete it when the problem is fixed ;)) Jeff has magical appearing/disappearing jeans ;)

He raised himself up slightly and ripped off his shirt and pushed down his jeans and briefs. She reached for him, wanting to touch but his own hands met her fingers halfway and closed around them.

“Jeff, please.”
He raised her fingers up to his lips and kissed them one by one; letting his tongue wet them gently. Impatient, she lifted her hips off the cool surface of the table and pressed her heat against the crotch of his jeans and smiled splendidly as she felt the telling hardening even through the tough denim.
“Jeff…”

I figure the sentences are out of order. I hope you don't think I'm picking on you or anything, I thought it's a kind thing to do to let you know about this little mishap so that the fic would truly be perfect.

umeko_star November 10 2011, 22:00:56 UTC

ALSKJASLKFJDFSLFJD
OMG THANKS. agh, this is what happens when i write on the laptop. and then continue writing in a notebook on the bus or something. YAH. THE SEX SCENES WERE WRITTEN ON A BUS WITH OLD LADIES AND LITTLE SCHOOL GIRLS SITTING AROUND ME. but yes, thank you. it's fixed now.

and you, you just made a personal dream of mine come true. you gave me GIF replies. I'VE ALWAYS WANTED TO WRITE SOMETHING THAT ELICITED GIFS IN THE RESPONSES.

i will write a more grateful response to yours soon. i'm in class. haha bad

teruel_a_witch November 13 2011, 23:32:51 UTC

Haha, there's nothing wrong with that;) I always read smut in public places on my phone, I've been doing it during boring lectures and seminars for years,too. The only awkward moment was when my Mum asked what I was reading and she wasn't just satisfied with a vague reply "fanfic" she wanted to know what it was about, to which I non-committally answered "Oh, well, you know, some boring romance-y stuff, you have to know characters to understand what it's about"(it was actually a PWP XD)

Glad I could help, it's always good to have a fresh pair of eyes, 'cause it's hard to proofread yourself. Me and my friend had a system where she'd discreetly read my exam paper to look for mistakes and I'd read hers, always helped with grammar and translation XD

Hee, I'm glad I could give some of the pleasure you brought me with this fic back <3

Btw, I'm a little confused so I wanted to ask, when was this?
the vision of her sitting atop the counters so many months ago as he prepared them dinner, or her leaning against him as he poured them their ( ... )

Thread 9

fangirl_101 April 12 2012, 19:31:53 UTC

I am such a fan of this series. I added it to my memories and re-read it every once in a while. But, I do have a question about something. This passage ( ... )

umeko_star April 13 2012, 00:45:54 UTC

Hi! Wow, thanks for reading! LKJSLKDJA;SLDJ You have no idea how much that means to me. I mean, your stories are phenomenal. I pretty much favourite every single one of them ( ... )

fangirl_101 April 13 2012, 14:53:28 UTC

OK! So they were together as friends not even realizing there was anything "wrong" with what they were doing (not that there is, AT ALL!) Annie would go over to Jeff's place for dinner, and sometimes crash there, without them realizing the implications and what others would think about it all if they knew. OK that makes total sense now! Thanks for clearing that up :) I feel like if society didn't exist (or was more open-minded) J/A would be together because it IS what's keeping them apart with it's judgment and social norms. Besides, 13 years is not that big of a gap, IMO ( ... )