Pursuit of Happiness

[unactivist]

Pursuit of Happiness

He is born a normal boy with ten fingers and two eyes and one set of lips. (Later, they’ll say there was something about the way he cried that hinted idiosyncrasies. And, that nose, they’ll say, that nose was simply too perfect.)

His mother looks down at him, nothing but adoration in her eyes, and names him ‘Dongwoon

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[unactivist]

lol, your comment. /humps

for real, why so precious. ♥_______________♥

you know how we roll, stealing candies and not coming back. don't deny it. 8} /watches you from the bushes

BUT REALLY WHY YOU NO FIC ANYMORE.

WHY YOU MAKE ME SADFACE. WRITE FIC, GDI.

[rustyrabbit]

Amazing. So much amazement throughout the story. I love the ending really. As much as I want to know what happened to Kwangie (& as much as I really want Kwangie to leave with seobie) I really like the course of action taken by the characters. Looking forward to more awesome stories!!

[unactivist]

Gahhh, what, you're too kind. /dies. Thank you so much for reading, omg. ♥

[ziggymok]

im in a incoherent state and still in a slight cathartic high
i love the fic (and you)
keep on writing
thanks

[unactivist]

lol, i had to look up cathartic. DON'T JUDGE ME.
i love you too, of course. /creeper

thank you for reading! ♥

[chun_ji]

this was amazing and mind-blowing and different from anything i have ever read.

I love how you wrote all the members, especially kikwang and yoseob with such empathy and sweetness.

jsyk my favourite paragraph was the "I'm going to tell you a joke" one. “The kicker is that there is no joke at all,” he whispers, “That’s what’s so funny. Get it?” that just ripped my heart out, bawww ;A;

I love how this fic has this strong undercurrent of angst and hope and every line is so powerful and just hits where it hurts. We’re like fragments of something they used to believe in.

thank you for sharing ;~; ♥

[unactivist]

geezus, i adore this comment. /flails about

oh, good, because i was so terrified of the characterization. this is the first time i ever wrote beast. /trembles. thank you so much for reading and liking this, udek. ♥__________♥

[johntheasian]

ASLDKGHASLDKGH this was amazing ;AAAAAA;
especially the realistic feel of it all.

but the ending T__________________T omg i wonder how kikwang and junhyung are doing?! and i hope hyunseung and yoseob are okay as well ;_;
don't worry i won't throw bricks :( idk why but i like endings like that but i don't like them at the same time?

your writing is amazing especially this: “The kicker is that there is no joke at all,” he whispers, “That’s what’s so funny. Get it?”

idk i just felt sad for dongwoon because it's like he never got to fully tell doojoon how he felt ;______________;

omg keep writing i love your work :)

[unactivist]

oh, jeez, why are you like this. /drown in the love.

thank you for reading and liking, bb. ♥

haha, the ending, yeah, uh, no clue, really. 8D /shot down