Re: Henry&JasperpaynesgreyJanuary 10 2011, 03:42:03 UTC
I don't know if this is what you wanted but here goes!
Comfortable
Jasper snickered lightly as the movie ended, and he realized that his cousin, who was curled up next to him under the warm blanket, seemed very still next to him. Both of them were wrapped up warmly on the futon-turned-bed in the living room, and when Henry didn’t move as he scooted closer, Jasper turned, wondering if he had fallen asleep during the movie. (How could he? The Hangover was like the funniest movie ever!) He shifted against him in the bed to inspect, and he noticed his cousin’s even breathing. Was he faking? And why would he?
Finally Jasper poked him, lightly at first but then the poking turned into a moderate succession of pokes, and his cousin still didn’t budge.
It was almost like he was ...deadJasper bit his lip. He hoped to God Henry wasn’t trying to freak him out by doing that thing again where he stopped his heart. Jasper sucked in a heavy, anxious breath
( ... )
Ha, I don't know if this is what you wanted, but I thought I'd take a crack at your prompt. - Paynesgrey
Accidental Tourists
Maggie looked down at her plate of food and wrinkled her nose. “Henry, my food is moving,” she complained, and she turned to Henry who wasn’t even paying attention. He was arguing with one of the owners in Mandarin. She was about to be impressed that he actually knew the language, but she was too busy being freaked out by her food. She turned to Jasper.
His face was white as a sheet. With wide eyes he shook his head at her vigorously. He leaned closer and whispered, “Best not to complain. I think the cook will actually kill us if we don’t eat his food
( ... )
Hunter always knew there was something up with these three. At first he thought it was something weird, like they were all doing each other or something, but then he realized they were just a bunch of crazy freaks. Unfortunately for him, he seemed to be drawn into their brand of trouble as well, and unwillingly he often experienced some of their bad luck
( ... )
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Comfortable
Jasper snickered lightly as the movie ended, and he realized that his cousin, who was curled up next to him under the warm blanket, seemed very still next to him. Both of them were wrapped up warmly on the futon-turned-bed in the living room, and when Henry didn’t move as he scooted closer, Jasper turned, wondering if he had fallen asleep during the movie. (How could he? The Hangover was like the funniest movie ever!) He shifted against him in the bed to inspect, and he noticed his cousin’s even breathing. Was he faking? And why would he?
Finally Jasper poked him, lightly at first but then the poking turned into a moderate succession of pokes, and his cousin still didn’t budge.
It was almost like he was ...deadJasper bit his lip. He hoped to God Henry wasn’t trying to freak him out by doing that thing again where he stopped his heart. Jasper sucked in a heavy, anxious breath ( ... )
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Since going with Henry, Maggie and Jasper have to get used to being the ones that don't fit in, while Henry does.
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Accidental Tourists
Maggie looked down at her plate of food and wrinkled her nose. “Henry, my food is moving,” she complained, and she turned to Henry who wasn’t even paying attention. He was arguing with one of the owners in Mandarin. She was about to be impressed that he actually knew the language, but she was too busy being freaked out by her food. She turned to Jasper.
His face was white as a sheet. With wide eyes he shook his head at her vigorously. He leaned closer and whispered, “Best not to complain. I think the cook will actually kill us if we don’t eat his food ( ... )
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long missed typo is long missed...wow, self
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Group Dynamics
Hunter always knew there was something up with these three. At first he thought it was something weird, like they were all doing each other or something, but then he realized they were just a bunch of crazy freaks. Unfortunately for him, he seemed to be drawn into their brand of trouble as well, and unwillingly he often experienced some of their bad luck ( ... )
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I loved Hunters view of each of them and then how they see themselves and the last bit was just great.
I loved how Hunter wanted nothing to do with them but wanted to be part of them. so great really.
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