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[unactivist]

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Seungri has never kept secrets from his mother, he doesn’t know how to, but today, today is an exception. He slips into laces and ribbons and he doesn’t tell her. He sneaks out at midnight when she’s sleeping, or maybe drinking wine. And, under streetlights, he runs.

He can trace his stupidity all the

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[papersanguine]

That was so beautifully worded! I love the way you included everyone and described the dancing! I wish i could write how frickin awesome this is but i fear all that will escape is something liek ajlfhdehgklzahlasg and WOW!~~

[xxasianicexx]

this is sooo angstyyyy omg T_T and it sounded like a crack fic at the start!!! sooo bittersweet it hurts ;; seungriiiii

[parkchoongjae]

They move to another city. ( “Maybe if you hang out with normal boys, you’ll change into one.” ) And, they make him date girls and take boxing lessons. He does everything they tell him to, but at night, no one can control him.

At night, he dances.

WHY SO ANGSTY T__T But my imagination is wild so I'm thinking since Jiyong is rich, he'd follow seungri anywhere. Thus the last line. <3

But this is damn good. omg. seungri au!ballerina and this angsty? you are amazing. <3

[unactivist]

:( It seems like all I can write is sad things. You should know this by now. ;_______________________________;

ROFL, thank you for the kind words darling. ♥

[parkchoongjae]

that's okay. you guys write angst. and i'll write fluff. XD

[stupidefleurk]

I'm.MADLY.in.love.with.this.
It enters in my top favorites fics (with oxygenlove's fics etc...)

It's been a long time since I read real angst like that,who break you heart D:
No need to quoting,I think you and everyone know how brillant the whole thing is <3

[melluransa]

This was beautiful! I love how you used these themes of opposites all the way through, pushing and pulling, giving and taking. It also flowed so well, like prose. So well done!