Now and Forever...Itsumademo... - Chapter 19C

Oct 18, 2009 01:32


Title: Now and Forever…いつまでも…

Author: Mayonaka no Taiyou/Unare Haineko

Pairing: [Juntoshi] Matsumoto Jun x Ohno Satoshi

Rating:  R-ish, but NC-17 for this chapter.

Summary: This story follows Ayumu, a more or less normal child born in 2012, three years after the ending of ‘Kodoku kara Umareta Ai’ (which you can read here).  His parents, Jun ( Read more... )

now and forever, juntoshi, arashi, fanfic

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mirai_kazuko October 18 2009, 13:23:24 UTC
waaaaaaaaaahh... what is Reya gonna do with Ohno? ;A;
Save him Jun~ <3

Oh.. and Hi. Long time no talk. lol

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unare_haineko October 20 2009, 06:01:46 UTC
Reiya is going to do what he does best--be the brainless sex machine amped up on meth. He's already in the clutches of depravity and he's gonna drag Ohno down with him. Jun's too busy wallowing in self pity to notice. XDD

I know it has been a while since the last update. Nice to see my Juntoshi hamburger icon again. XDD <33

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madisonfink October 19 2009, 01:20:33 UTC
OHNO!FUZAKENNAYO! Why aren't you patient?!

I missed you, my lovely wife XD

I love you and this story. Now....to go die because you've left me alone for so long my heart can't cope with you DoS cliffhangers. ^.^

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unare_haineko October 20 2009, 06:06:13 UTC
Because he's NaSA!Ohno!!! Why would a narcissistic sex addict be patient! The signs are there!!! Wake up, Jun, lest the guilt and shame consume you...

I missed you too, darling. Go read the chapter again and see if you noticed anything new this time around.

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Commentary Ch 19, On Fa9, Aiba and Sho mmestrange October 19 2009, 18:13:11 UTC
A I have stated several times in previous commentary sessions, everything in the plot of Itsumademo is interconnected. The drugs in JE subplot is linked to Iago’s scheme to bring down Arashi from within (and undergoing a revival it would seem due to Reiya’s latest move). The connection of the Fa9-police-superintendent-father and Miyazono-as-public-prosecutor subplot is also made clear and those will work against Iago. We see slowly how the net is being drawn over Iago and the sod doesn’t realise it yet ( ... )

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Re: Commentary Ch 19, On Fa9, Aiba and Sho unare_haineko October 20 2009, 06:08:29 UTC
Yes, can you imagine the delicious torture of our little cherry blossom once he breaks Aiba's heart. Ooh, angry Tiny, drug lord Fanine...It will be like throwing a bouquet of roses violently to the ground. Red petals everywhere. Sweet anemone...

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Re: Commentary Ch 19, On Fa9, Aiba and Sho mmestrange October 20 2009, 07:15:33 UTC
*cackle* All the blood! And we'll have enough to bathe in! Then it will be Sho's funeral. Oh... Maybe we'll have a murder suicide. That would be vastly entertaining. There's nothing like mutual obliteration to show the depth of the Sakuraiba relationship. You still haven't revealed why the Sakuraiba flat was in such a jarring half of disarray and neatness yet... Hmm

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Re: Commentary Ch 19, On Fa9, Aiba and Sho unare_haineko October 21 2009, 07:58:30 UTC
A blood bath! A blood bath! It's raining blood... I want to make truffles!

Mutual obliteration and risk putting our little cherry blossom out of his misery?! Nonsense! Sakurai must live and pay for his sins and watch the very thing that cares the most for him slip through his fingers...

Disarray and neatness...hah. I see you haven't forgotten about that. Wouldn't you like to know...? Ufufufu....

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Commentary Ch 19, On Miyazono and Jun, part 1 mmestrange October 19 2009, 18:15:13 UTC
Hubby has been wonderful in this chapter, truly a man with the mind of Xenophon and a form like mortal. I’d shatter more than religious commandments for him. The power trip that he’ll be on will be delicious to watch. Now, hubby sees a lot and knows far more than he’s letting at the moment. We’ve already received hints of hubby’s perspicuity in the Rubik’s cube chapters with the prophecies and all that. We’ve learnt that Miyazono is protective towards Jun because he feels Jun is a replacement of sorts for his son. We know this because of their names shares the same kanji. I’m biased but I must say I’m pleased as punch that Miyazono’s an uxorious husband. I even chuckled at the 118 people responsible for his misery. Oh, Haineko and her number play. *laugh* Iago will be the one to burn this time. I look forward to that. In numerology, 118 becomes 1+1+8=10. 10 becomes 1 in numerology because 1+0=1. And 1 stands for the single aggressor. Iago will burn when all the people he’s antagonised come together as one to be rid of him. Very, very ( ... )

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Commentary Ch 19, On Miyazono and Jun, part 2 mmestrange October 19 2009, 18:15:57 UTC
Ohno left himself wide open before and during the fellatio act. He gave enough away to Jun to lend credence to any supposition that he has been unfaithful. He’s cold most of the time and isolates himself from the family unit away from Jun and Ayu. Then he panics when he thinks Jun or Ayu is on to his secret infidelity. Then he practically wants to rush through sex like how men are with whores (who do set time-limits on coitus or so I’m told). These things coupled with the trilogy do paint Ohno in the light of the cheater). As befitting his NaSA tendencies, Ohno (an artist) no longer appreciates that the state of undress is sexier than the nakedness. All Ohno cares about is sexual gratification - his own sexual gratification ( ... )

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Re: Commentary Ch 19, On Miyazono and Jun, part 2 unare_haineko October 20 2009, 06:23:19 UTC
I can just imagine you smirking behind those lovely spectacles and snickering as vindication strikes! Uxorious Miyazono whose misery was at the hands of 118 disgruntled employees...Would you expect any less of the late Lady Shoko? I thought you might like the 'Kazuga Nozomi' bit. I knew that its real meaning would not be lost on you, my sweet belladonna. <3333

Jun...he's had a real reversal of fortune as of late. A poorly fitted ring, guilt, paranoia, treated like a whore, nearly lost an eye thanks to the wanker's ejaculation....poor sod. And you can bet your knickers that the apple blossoms shall be dying very soon. A certain Tony-sensei will be so disappointed that his research has been disrupted....

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Re: Commentary Ch 19, On Miyazono and Jun, part 2 mmestrange October 20 2009, 07:26:46 UTC
Mortal sin + Xenophon's mind = Irresistible to Lady Strange.

Hubby has been wonderful. I love him even more now. The moment I saw the kanji characters, my head went into the Chinese meanings and I laughed whilst sipping your lychee tea. Hurrah! Hubby will tear Iago's organs one by one while the bugger's alive. Kyaah... My Yuuichi is truly a man amongst men. The hope offered by Nozomi may be slight but I'm sure of it being very useful. I look forward to seeing how it unfolds.

Jun needs a kick in the head to wake up. If one knows one is being treated like a whore, one doesn't have to take the role. But Jun does... Idiot! Dying apple blossoms and more on Dr Tony! Oh la la! This will be high entertainment indeed.

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Commentary Ch 19, On Nino and Daisuke, part 1 mmestrange October 21 2009, 17:56:48 UTC
I’ve noticed that everything in ryokan Tachibana unfolds on 24th April. In American notation, I know it’s 4.24. It appears a little odd to me, but I’ll let it slide because of my snotty English biases. This 424 is repeated in the room that Nino booked. 424 is run time error in computer-speak. My, my, Daisuke has encountered a runtime error and Kazu has taken the advantage. In 424 BC, Xerxes II of Persia was killed in a coup d’etat after being on the throne for 40-something days. This means, Kazu is moving in to ‘kill’ Daisuke as it were ( ... )

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Commentary Ch 19, On Nino and Daisuke, part 2 mmestrange October 21 2009, 17:57:27 UTC

Now that Daisuke has realised Iago wants him to be a brainless minion, all thatis required is a little push before Diauske turns against Iago. What will be that push?

(04) From Daisuke’s inner monologue en route to ryokan Tachibana, it sounds like he realises something is amiss in Iago’s plan to be rid of the former Arashi members at all cost. Will Daisuke starting probing as to why?

(05) What will be the turning point where Daisuke will be turned against Iago? Will it be the discovery that Reiya is doing unsavoury things to Ohno (whom Daisuke has half figured out Nino is still half-pining for)? Or will it be something Gima does or say?

(06) How far will Daisuke go in protecting Nino from Iago? That’s something that has been a matter of intellectual curiosity for me. With the drug plot practically thrown at Nino at the same time Ohno’s going down that route with Reiya (not to mention Ohno’sprevious brush with drugs whilst with the jimusho), it will be a matter of time before Kazu makes the connection. When that happens, ( ... )

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Re: Commentary Ch 19, On Nino and Daisuke, part 2 unare_haineko October 23 2009, 22:44:31 UTC
Gray...gray...gray...isn't it lovely how Kazu has begun his little attack on dear Daisuke?

I like your residual questions for this section, particularly (05) and (06). Dig, dig, dig, Kazu, like the dirty dog we know you can be! Meh, Daisuke will be Daisuke. Wishywashy until the end. But we both secretly know that he will eventually burn with honor for the memory of his sweet mother. You can run, but you can't hide, my pretty...

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Re: Commentary Ch 19, On Nino and Daisuke, part 2 mmestrange October 24 2009, 14:12:53 UTC
Kazu is a good lad. He has my full approval for his assault on the fortress Daisuke.

I merely state things as I see them. Heh. Well, when Daisuke burns, we can use his remains for soap. *cackle*

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