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[unaxeptdtheory]

running out of time

Comments

[seitosilver]

I think it's good enough on it's own. A word of advice though, poems like this are all about mood, shortening words like hte, culd, and u sometimes distracts readers from the poem.

[unaxeptdtheory]

well it's not a poem, its actually supposed to be lyrics to a song im trying to write, so u wont see the shortening of the words, and u won't b able to here it either.

[seitosilver]

Well in that case it doesn't matter. It looks pretty, though you'll have to show me how it sounds.

[jordoofus]

You know what you should do? You should update.