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[jaydill20]

This is a free verse poem that I wrote for school a couple of months ago. Comment with any criticism, please! :)

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Hey again

[hanpasha_cave]

Hey, i know i already replied to this via email but i thought id like to say it again in post, i never was a big fan of free verse, and i really liked that, its great :-)

-Hanpasha

Oh yeah

[hanpasha_cave]

By the way, i thought i should throw in some thought building stuff or what ever its called, i really liked it... umm, keep using the... things.. yeah... im to tired lol, awesome still hahaha

-Hanpasha