The Girl with Flaxen Hair - Chapter Eight

Nov 13, 2010 11:31

As he succumbs to the illness that robbed him of his family, a lonely man finds solace in a dream...


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molliemole November 13 2010, 17:42:20 UTC
Ah, poor befuddled William. It just gets more and more incredible to him, doesn't it?
I'm wondering if Buffy couldn't bring along some TB medication on one of her visits. If she knew what was what he needed.

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unbridled_b November 14 2010, 15:41:25 UTC
Ah, poor befuddled William. It just gets more and more incredible to him, doesn't it?

It sure does! But, considering all the odd things he's seen, I think he's holding up pretty well. :P

I'm wondering if Buffy couldn't bring along some TB medication on one of her visits. If she knew what was what he needed.

I really want to comment on this, but I can't for fear of giving away the plot. Still, I will say that the possibility will be addressed at some point. (Was that appropriately noncommittal?)

As always, thanks so much for reading and commenting! :)

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slaymesoftly November 13 2010, 18:41:22 UTC
Poor William. He's barely begun to know what's going on. :)

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unbridled_b November 14 2010, 15:42:49 UTC
Oh, he's barely tipped the iceberg. Actually, I don't even think he's tipped it yet. He's only just noticed it sitting on a distant horizon. ;)

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petzipellepingo November 13 2010, 18:51:35 UTC
“So, what you’re telling me is that you are actually from the future? Some type of traveler through time?”

“Sort of. I mean, there’s more to it than just that, but I think we can save that particular revelation for another time.”

Deeper and deeper down the rabbit hole for poor William.

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unbridled_b November 14 2010, 15:44:25 UTC
It is a lot for him to take in, the poor boy. At least he had a good buzz going to soften the impact.

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rebcake November 13 2010, 18:53:00 UTC
C'mon, Buff! Buy yourself a clue! (Nice, tall bottle of antibiotics....mmmmm, good!)

I am pleased that William is no longer certain he is hallucinating. Though I was enjoying the relief he gets from laudanum. I am loving his (very slight) loosening up. For him, his behavior is very devil may care. Maybe he'll let go enough to actually kiss her in another few weeks. *dreamy sigh* Though I doubt it. Poor, grieving Buffy is going to have to take the bull by the horns, as it were. Hmmmm. I wonder if she'll desert William when/if she finds out Spike's not as dead as she thought. This makes me sad.

Another gripping chapter, darling.

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unbridled_b November 14 2010, 15:52:04 UTC
C'mon, Buff! Buy yourself a clue! (Nice, tall bottle of antibiotics....mmmmm, good!)

The possibility of her doing so will be raised at some point, though not exactly in the manner one would expect -- and that's all I can say without giving it all away. At least, I hope it is. I didn't just give it away, did I? :O

I am pleased that William is no longer certain he is hallucinating. Though I was enjoying the relief he gets from laudanum. I am loving his (very slight) loosening up. For him, his behavior is very devil may care. Maybe he'll let go enough to actually kiss her in another few weeks. *dreamy sigh* Though I doubt it. Poor, grieving Buffy is going to have to take the bull by the horns, as it were. Hmmmm. I wonder if she'll desert William when/if she finds out Spike's not as dead as she thought. This makes me sad.Oh, I'm sure he thinks he's downright rebellious. Of course, he can't take the laudanum forever (at least not without some nasty consequences), so at some point he'll have to learn to interact with her without having ( ... )

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sarian71 November 13 2010, 20:43:10 UTC
"It had been so long since he experienced real human contact he had almost forgotten how much he craved it"

Oh, William. I loved how Buffy's touch was what calmed him down.

“But you never know,” she added a moment later. “It might open for you, too. Someday.”

Intriguing...

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unbridled_b November 14 2010, 16:20:03 UTC
Oh, William. I loved how Buffy's touch was what calmed him down.

One of the things I noticed in "Fool for Love" is that at first William backed away from Drusilla and tried to put her off verbally, but once she actually touched him, he became much more receptive to her. Not only that, but when she did touch him, her hand stroked down his chest and then out of frame, causing him to gasp, which suggests she was touching him in an intimate place. Yet despite his obvious shyness and reserve, he didn't protest or try to stop her. In "Destiny" Drusilla called him "a hungry little kitty" and said he'd been "starved." While she most likely meant he had been starved for sex, I really think he was desperate for a physical contact of any sort. In later episodes, Spike always seemed to put a lot of emphasis on touch; in "As You Were" we even saw him holding himself in his sleep. I think it's sad his character never seemed to receive the affection he so obviously craved.

Intriguing...

I'm glad you think so. Thank you!

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sarian71 November 14 2010, 16:54:23 UTC
"I think it's sad his character never seemed to receive the affection he so obviously craved."

*pets him*

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unbridled_b November 16 2010, 04:49:41 UTC
Oh, I'd totally pet him ... probably for all the wrong reasons. :P

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