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Mar 28, 2006 03:39
INT. DR. MOORE'S OFFICE (
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drshu
March 28 2006, 15:09:31 UTC
Nice.
I would delete the last two lines of dialogue.
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unclmoishe
March 29 2006, 12:03:11 UTC
I would too. I don't really like them. In fact, consider them deleted.
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