1 Sentence Challenge - Axel x Cloud - Beta

Jan 28, 2007 23:52

Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Pairing: Axel x Cloud Strife
Theme set: Beta
Rating: NC-17
For: 1sentence

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cajun_cat January 29 2007, 22:34:11 UTC
I've never seen this pairing before, but reading all of those has made me like it very much. I really enjoyed these, but #28 and #32 were really favourites for me, with the naughtiness of the former and the subtle angst of the latter. Also #50 and #49 combined were a beautiful way of finishing the whole thing off. Loved it.
Really interesting!

Much love,
Cajun Cat

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undepressme January 30 2007, 00:16:31 UTC
:D Glad you liked them! I wish there were more Axel/Cloud :(

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fantasia0829 January 30 2007, 12:17:54 UTC
You amazed me again with your 1sentences. Lovely lovely lovely. Makes me want to write a Axel/Cloud fic. XD No faves, cuz I love them all.

And for #11... wouldn't that mean that Cloud's bike will have to call Axel's bike dad? XDDDD I mean, after all, Fenrir is Loki's son. XD

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undepressme January 30 2007, 20:22:36 UTC
Heh, yeah, I thought about that. Well...Cloud has had Fenrir longer, right?

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fantasia0829 February 1 2007, 12:50:16 UTC
Wouldn't that make the son older than the dad? XDDDD

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undepressme February 1 2007, 20:24:47 UTC
...XD Shh, don't tell anybody.

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yuna_lockhart February 7 2007, 08:06:21 UTC

These are very well done! I'm generally not a fan of slash, or anything over an R rating...but I figured I'd take my chances with these and I am very glad I did! These aren't trashy or self-righteous...they're very genuine and beautiful :) And I love that you added that they reminded each other of faded memories...I did something similar to that myself, recently...I think that touch helps make it a bit more real :) Great work!

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undepressme February 9 2007, 20:25:53 UTC
I'm glad you took the chance and I'm even happier that you liked them!! Thank you.

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