Yay

[undertoe]

Newww poem... oh yes, and I actually like it

Poetry In Motion by Sir Nicholas Schram

Comments

[fushigitohadaka]

I wonder what you were thinking about when you wrote this.... lol

k, all joking aside, I think this is really great. I'm not good at giving actual feedback, but I know that whenever I read your poems, I always like them.

[madeyadams]

yeah.. i never understand your poems that well. But this one was striking to me because it reminded me of sex.

*thumbs up*

[daman4udog]

get an old mercedes or BMW - both are reliable, safe, classy, fun to drive, and most importantly dirt cheap.

on another note - the poem is awesome!

[lissi_9]

usually I dont feel able to comment on your poetry. It seems so personal - and who am i to critique something like that? But this poem - just - awesome. i like it a lot. =)