Another poem...

[undertoe]

My first jab at a sonnet, or any kind of poem with a prescribed format. Tell me what you think.

A Rose Saved: A Sonnet by Sir Nicholas Schram

Comments

[fushigitohadaka]

OOO LOOK AT ME LOOK AT ME I'M FINALLY DOING MY MANDATORY COMMENT!!!!

HA! you can't hassel me anymore!!!

WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!

And of course i loved it! I'm not much of a poet, but everyone of yours always pulls something out of me...

*pat on the back*

[lissi_9]

why make comments mandatory about your poetry on livejournal? seriously - most everyone who reads is your friend and not many are poets themselves or write poetry worthwhile, etc. What am i supposed to say to your poem? "Great job"? ---> just curious.

but for a comment worth nothing -
it reminds me of a line in frost - something about rose petals being hurtful. something like that.