New poem #1

[undertoe]

Written today in history, my second attempt at a sonnet.

Prelude To Truth: A Sonnet by Sir Nicholas Schram

Comments

I'm not a gonna lie...

[basshole_221]

Dude, I always love your poetry Schramathorn, it rocks, but I dont really need to tell you that. This sonnet is perhaps one of my favorites that you've written...i like it a lot, i really do.

Re: I'm not a gonna lie...

[undertoe]

Thanks man! I really appreciate feedback like that. And BTW, FUCKING AWESOME icon! I love that movie!

[lissi_9]

do not take this is a dis - I dont think im a huge fan of sonnets. just the style in general. Maybe that's bc poetry isnt really my thing.

but i love the last line. it makes me sigh happily.