New poem #2

[undertoe]

English portion written today in... English. Translations worked on throughout the day.

For the best effect, read this part first and then click below for the translated version. Written in 13 different languages. Don't correct any mistranslations, because they're all intentional :-D

Xenophobic Nightmares by Sir Nicholas Schram

Comments

[lissi_9]

nick- I love it. It's got a great inclusive message without being corny like most pieces of writing that try to do that ( like my potential college essays...)

I dont quite understand the use of english sometimes in the first part. Was there a certain pattern?

What were the languages? --> spanish, french, chinese (?), japanese, german(?), something african?

[undertoe]

The English sort of comes through like... white noise. Spanish, French, Chinese, Japanese, Korean, German, Swahili, Hindi, Arabic, Russian, Latin, English, and Italian.

[fushigitohadaka]

amazing....

i love it mucho

... sorry i'm no good at commenting, but know that i love it!