new poem

[undertoe]

Just wrote it today... Lots of stuff to this one... I've written a couple before this that I didn't post. If you really want to see them, I'm gonna need to see some comments on this baby...

The Fawn by Sir Nicholas Schram

In a diamond-placid pond, fragile legs kneel.
In this innocent world of love, there is no fear to wield.A fawn awakens from a

Comments

[vllgeidiot]

oh my god. nick. i love you

[hootchiesmurf]

i really like this poem... a lot. A LOT A LOT!

minus the "cushy" part. i don't like that word.

♥

[modmouse36]

jesus christ nick. dont you realize that livejournal strictly forbids artistic endeavors? this program is only for whiny bitches to beat around the bush at their petty problems!

im glad you use this program to express yourself nick.

[vampyroteuthis]

From a poet to a poet, I love it

LOVE RYAN

[vampyroteuthis]

Is it bad that I read this today and thought it was the first time I had read it?

[undertoe]

Not at all.